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Describe a children's park you have visited recently. v.1

Describe a children's park you have visited recently. v. 1
Describe a children's park you have visited recently. You should say: When you went there Who was with you What you did there and explain why you went to visit this children's park. Model Answer: Last month I visited a children’s park in our area with my 8 year's old nephew. He was getting bored at home and his mother requested me to take him outside and I took him to the nearby children’s park. It was in the evening and there were lots of other children who came there with their parents. I found that my nephew Smith was very happy to be in this park and he enjoyed the activities offered there for children. He rode on many rides and ran for a long until he got tired. I went there after a very long time and enjoyed the children’s activity as they were playing, shouting and joyfully running in the park. There were many trees and flowers in this park and I was mostly watching my nephew or the other children. At a time I found that John had already made two/ three playmates and they all came to me and asked me to take a picture. I took few photos of those angelic kids and bought them some nuts and ice-creams. When the darkness started falling around us, I asked my nephew to get back home and we started walking towards home. Both of us enjoyed our sudden visit to that children’s park though one of us one not a child at all!     Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a public place you often go to.   Describe a place in your city where people often visit.   Describe a place where you often visit.
Describe
a children's
park
you have visited recently. You should say: When you went there Who was with you What you did there and
explain
why you went to
visit
this
children's
park
. Model Answer:

Last month I visited a
children’s
park
in our area with my 8 year's
old
nephew
. He was getting bored at home and his mother requested me to take him outside and I took him to the nearby
children’s
park
. It was in the evening and there were lots of other
children
who came there with their parents. I found that my
nephew
Smith was
very
happy to be in this
park and
he enjoyed the activities offered there for
children
. He rode on
many
rides and ran for a long until he
got
tired. I went there after a
very
long time and enjoyed the
children’s
activity as they were playing, shouting and
joyfully
running in the
park
. There were
many
trees and flowers in this
park and
I was
mostly
watching my
nephew
or the other
children
. At a time I found that John had already made two/ three
playmates and
they all came to me and asked me to take a picture. I took few photos of those angelic kids and
bought
them
some
nuts and ice-creams. When the darkness
started
falling around us, I asked my
nephew
to
get
back
home and
we
started
walking towards home. Both of us enjoyed our sudden
visit
to that
children’s
park
though one of us one not a child at all!
   
Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
Describe
a public place you
often
go to.
 
Describe
a place in your city where
people
often
visit
.
 
Describe
a place where you
often
visit
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a children's park you have visited recently. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
310 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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