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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

Dear sir, This is yazer from west town city, recently I came to know that the star builders is going to construct a shopping mall in west town city, which is very near to my house. Actually I am worried about the new construction work because that will make heavy noise and people living in the street shall be uncomfortable, especially at night time. I would like to know about the working time for the construction activity and request you to schedule the work timing on day time. looking forward a positive response from your side. yours faithfullyM. Yazer
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from west town city, recently I came to know that the star builders is going to construct a shopping mall in west town city, which is
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near to my
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heavy noise and
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living in the street shall be uncomfortable,
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. I would like to know about the working time for the construction activity and request you to schedule the work timing on day time.

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IELTS letter You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

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  American English
2 paragraphs
98 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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