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WRITE AN ESAY ABOUT TET HOLIDAY IN YOUR COUNTRY

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Nowadays, we have a number of holidays from big to small such as: Tet holiday; Halloween; Valentine…and so on. Tet holiday is also known as Lunar New Year which most important holiday in Vietnam. According to each region, the way of celebrating and the culture is also different. Vietnam is divined to three regions: North; South and Central. I was born at the south of Vietnam so I would like to describe how I prepare and celebrate Tet holiday in there.
Nowadays, we have a number of
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IELTS essay WRITE AN ESAY ABOUT TET HOLIDAY IN YOUR COUNTRY

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