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Introduction, there is one main idea. Firstly, secondly, furthermore, there is one main idea with examples and it full of meaning, so, because, as, however, yet. On the other hand, First of all, second of all, Moreover, finally, it is meaningful therefore deserves 9 band score and has just one main idea. Because of, in spite of, despite, although. In conclusion, everything, migration, full of ideas and the best essay, even though. Academic words.
Introduction, there is one main
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idea
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Firstly
,
secondly
,
furthermore
, there is one main
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idea
with examples and it
Did you mean "fulls"?
full
of meaning,
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so
,
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because
, as,
however
,
yet
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On the other hand
,
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First of all
, second of all,
Moreover
,
finally
, it is meaningful
therefore
deserves 9 band score and has
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just
one main
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idea
.
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Because
of,
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in spite of
, despite, although.

In conclusion
, everything, migration, full of
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ideas
and the best essay,
even though
. Academic words.

IELTS essay What is this? Do you know?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
74 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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