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What food do you eat at family celebration Do you know how to prepare them Do you need any special equipment

What food do you eat at family celebration Do you know how to prepare them Do you need any special equipment yXL8d
Every time my family have a celebration, I always eat Quang noddle. It's is very tasty and I started wonder about how to make Quang noddle. But after helping my mother make Quang noddle, I really confident that I can make Quang noddle by my self. Firstly, We need to cut the rips and vegetables into bite-sized pieces. Secondly, we stew the rips with some vegetables to make Quang noddle's soup. When the rips is ready, we will add spices to taste. On the other hand, we need to prepare noddle by making it from flour or buying it at the market. After that, we garnish it with a little stallions. Quang noddle is amazing but really easy to make and doesn't need any special equipment.
Every time my family have a celebration, I always eat
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Quang
noddle.
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very
tasty and I
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started
wonder about how to
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make
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Quang
noddle.
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But
after helping my mother
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make
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Quang
noddle, I
really
confident that I can
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make
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Quang
noddle by my self.
Firstly
, We need to
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cut
the rips and vegetables into bite-sized pieces.
Secondly
, we stew the rips with
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some
vegetables to
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make
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Quang
noddle's soup. When the rips
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is
ready, we will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
spices to taste.
On the other hand
, we need to prepare noddle by making it from flour or buying it at the market. After that, we garnish it with a
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little
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stallions
.
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Quang
noddle is amazing
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but
really
easy to
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make
and doesn't need any special equipment.
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IELTS essay What food do you eat at family celebration Do you know how to prepare them Do you need any special equipment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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