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What are the merits and demerits of digital banking? Did you think traditional banking is safer than digital banking?

What are the merits and demerits of digital banking? Did you think traditional banking is safer than digital banking? pJ1ba
Firstly, I believe traditional banking much secure than digital banking, that we can aviod the fraudster while using the transaction. Moreover digital banking quite friendly and easily relaible to operate than a normal transaction. Inspite of traditional banking everything moves on a transparent way, there we never mediate about transcation failures. It was definitely done through a physical medium. Further than digital banking the transaction will not struck in any medium apart untill our details would be correct. Secondly, In E banking, the transaction was able to perform from a electronic device such as a computer, mobile, electronic vending machine which was assigned by bank. There a 3D security interface while we processed our transaction. In conclusion both of them have there on benifits and negativity. Neverthless I believe for any emergency situation Ebanking is the acurate option for fast transaction as well as for heavy funding I would be suggested for traditional transactions.
Firstly
, I believe traditional
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banking
much
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secure
than digital
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banking
, that we can
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aviod
the fraudster while using the
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transaction
.
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Moreover
digital
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banking
quite friendly and
easily
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relaible
to operate than a normal transaction.

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Inspite
of traditional
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banking
everything
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moves
on a transparent way, there we never mediate about
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transcation
failures. It was definitely done through a physical medium.
Further
than digital
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banking
the
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transaction
will not
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struck
in any medium apart
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untill our
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details
would be correct.

Secondly
, In E
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banking
, the
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transaction
was able to perform from
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a
electronic device such as a computer, mobile, electronic vending machine which
was assigned
by bank. There a 3D security interface while we processed our transaction.

In conclusion
both of them have there on
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benifits
and negativity.
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Neverthless
I believe for any emergency situation
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Ebanking
is the
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acurate
option for
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fast
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transaction
as well
as for heavy funding I would
be suggested
for traditional
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transactions
.
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IELTS essay What are the merits and demerits of digital banking? Did you think traditional banking is safer than digital banking?

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