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vegetarians is more ethical than eating meat, to what extent do you agree or disagre

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With the passage of the time, more people are becoming vegetarians. For some people consuming meat is less ethical than not eating it. This essay will argue that vegetarianism is more ethical as animals are also human beings and they should live in adequate environments Meat comes from animals and they are humans being who feel as humans. Animals also have feelings and emotions. this is shown in a study done in 2018 shows that when cows were told that they were going to die their brains light out in the same way when humans were told the same. This proves that as it is unethical to eat people because they have felt, it would be also unethical to eat animals. In addition, animals who are raised to be eaten tend lo live in filthy warehouses. These spaces are small and dirty. For example, a warehouse for chickens in Sydney tend to contain 20 chickens in just one square meter. Measurements that provide an inadequate life for those animals and should be unethical In conclusion, there is people who believe that eating meat is unethical while others do not. However, animals are also humans beings and should have good living conditions which make eating animals unethical
With the passage of the time, more
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people
are becoming vegetarians. For
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some
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people
consuming meat is less ethical than not eating it. This essay will argue that vegetarianism is more ethical as
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animals
are
also
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human
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beings and
they should
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live
in adequate
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environments


Meat
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comes
from
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animals and
they are
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humans
being who feel as
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humans
.
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Animals
also
have feelings and emotions.
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this
is shown
in a study done in 2018
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shows
that when cows were
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told
that they were going to
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die
their brains light out
in the same way
when
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humans
were
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told
the same. This proves that as it is
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unethical
to eat
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people
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because
they have felt, it would be
also
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unethical
to eat animals.

In addition
,
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animals
who
are raised
to
be eaten
tend lo
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live
in filthy warehouses. These spaces are
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small
and dirty.
For example
, a warehouse for chickens in Sydney tend to contain 20 chickens in
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just
one square meter. Measurements that provide an inadequate life for those
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animals
and should be
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unethical


In conclusion
, there is
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people
who believe that eating meat is
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unethical
while others do not.
However
,
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animals
are
also
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humans beings
and should have
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good
living conditions which
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make
eating
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animals
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unethical

IELTS essay vegetarians is more ethical than eating meat, to what extent do you agree or disagre

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
205 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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