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using vessels as electric batteries in ancient times

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The lecturer disputes the suggested author's claims that the clay jars discovered in Iraq were not used as electric batteries in ancient times. She provides several compelling reasons to casts doubt about the author's claims. First, according to the text the jars were not used as batteries since no electric wires were discovered nearby the jars. The lecturer find this idea debatable. she asserts that indeed they might have been used as batteries because those ruins were discovered by ordinary people. He contends that it is possible that because the jars were not discovered by archaeologists, they were overlooked. Second, the lecturer contradicts the fallacy of the passage that the copper in the jars was used to hold the scrolls. She asserts that indeed they might have been used as batteries. Theoretically speaking it is possible that a device at some point might be used to serve one purpose. However, later in time it might serve another purpose. She asserts that this exactly what happened with the cylinders that were discovered. Finally, the author argues that there are no need for batteries at that time since nothing operates on electricity. However, the lecturer confidently refutes this claim by stating that ancient people used electricity to heal from pain. Moreover, The lecturer contends that people believed at that time of the invisible power, thus, they might have used such devices to alleviate pain.

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