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TPO14 integrated writing: Salvage logging

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The author maintains that salvage logging is advantageous to damaged forest and to the local economy, however, the lecturer disagrees with it for several reasons. First, while the author contends that salvage logging will create more spaces for new plants to grow and will benefit the environment, the lecturer argues that eliminating the rotting tree materials will not only remove the substances which are good to the growth of trees but also deprived the soil of nutrients that are essential to trees. Second, the author claims that cleaning up the dead trees will help eliminating the bad insects, however, the lecturer says that salvage logging will indiscriminally wipe out the bad insects as well as some good insects and birds which are beneficial to the health of the forest. Third, the lecturer points out the fact that salvage logging will actually bring little economic profits to industries because expensive helicoptors and viechles are needed to collect the dead woods which might still be useful. Also, the jobs provided are not permenent and local people will not get the jobs because they are not so well trained and experienced compared to outsiders.
The author maintains that
salvage
logging
is advantageous to damaged forest and to the local economy,
however
, the
lecturer
disagrees with it for several reasons.

First
, while the author contends that
salvage
logging
will create more spaces for new plants to grow and will benefit the environment, the
lecturer
argues that eliminating the rotting tree materials will not
only
remove the substances which are
good
to the growth of trees
but
also
deprived the soil of nutrients that are essential to trees.

Second, the author claims that cleaning up the dead trees will
help
eliminating
the
bad
insects,
however
, the
lecturer
says that
salvage
logging
will
indiscriminally
wipe out the
bad
insects
as well
as
some
good
insects and birds which are beneficial to the health of the forest.

Third, the
lecturer
points out the fact that
salvage
logging
will actually bring
little
economic profits to industries
because
expensive
helicoptors
and
viechles
are needed
to collect the dead woods which might
still
be useful.
Also
, the jobs provided are not
permenent
and local
people
will not
get
the jobs
because
they are not
so
well trained
and experienced compared to outsiders.
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IELTS essay TPO14 integrated writing: Salvage logging

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
191 words
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5.0
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