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TOEFL integrated writing Chevalier de Seingalt

TOEFL integrated writing Chevalier de Seingalt m159d
The reading states that critics have raised doubts about the accuracy of the memoir as they claim that Chevalier distorted and invented many events and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor states that the memoir is reliable as a historical source. and successfully refutes three reasons presented by the reading. First, the reading states that Chevalier was not rich, thus did not gamble. Byt, the professor refutes this idea stating that he had properties in Switzerland. It took time to sell those properties. So, sometimes, he borrowed from someone and gambled. he later paid and this does not mean, he was poor. Second, the reading states that critics are skeptical about the accuracy of the conversations that the Chevalier records in the memoir between himself and the famous writer Voltaire. The professor contends this point stating that Chevalier used to write everything he remembered and kept doing for many years. His friends confirmed it. They also suggest that Chevalier kept those journals in a very safe place. Second, the reading avers that critics have questioned the memoir's account of the Chevalier's escape from a prison in Venice, Italy as they think that he used his political friends to get out from prison. But, the lecture argues that other prisoners had more powerful friends and they were unable to break. He also states that a government document had been found which states that prison authorities had to repair the ceiling after Voltaire escaped. That's how the professor refutes the main three reasons provided by the reading.
The
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that critics have raised doubts about the accuracy of the memoir as they claim that Chevalier distorted and invented
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many
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events
and provides three reasons of support.
However
, the
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professor
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states
that the memoir is reliable as a historical source.
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and
successfully
refutes three reasons presented by the reading.

First
, the
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that Chevalier was not rich,
thus
did not gamble.
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Byt
, the
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professor
refutes this
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idea
stating that he had properties in Switzerland. It took time to sell those properties.
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So
,
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sometimes
, he borrowed from someone and gambled.
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he
later paid and this does not mean, he was poor.

Second, the
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reading
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states
that critics are skeptical about the accuracy of the conversations that the Chevalier records in the memoir between himself and the
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famous
writer Voltaire. The
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professor
contends this point stating that Chevalier
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used
to write everything he remembered and
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kept
doing for
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many
years. His friends confirmed it. They
also
suggest that Chevalier
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kept
those journals in a
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very
safe place.

Second, the
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avers that critics have questioned the memoir's account of the Chevalier's escape from a prison in Venice, Italy as they
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think
that he
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used
his political friends to
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get
out from prison.
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But
, the lecture argues that other prisoners had more powerful
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friends and
they were unable to break. He
also
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states
that a
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government
document had
been found
which
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states
that prison authorities had to repair the ceiling after Voltaire escaped.

That's how the
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professor
refutes the main three reasons provided by the
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reading
.

IELTS essay TOEFL integrated writing Chevalier de Seingalt

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
257 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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