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Today times in the games have been changed.

Today times in the games have been changed. New technology came into this world. Video games begin well-known amongst ours, the cause is it is cheap and affordable. Even if, father and mother are known about, this is harmful to children, on the contrary, they cannot do stop, owing to the fact that those kids who are not following them obey. Games are, who does not like in their life, due to the fact this with nowadays people are time spent in your free time? This gadget is being populated into every age. Moreover, the public to know about, its habit will not live us. That, s why they cannot do focus on other activities. That's what, the thing is bothering parents. For example, Cut off the study and being affected on eyes as well as being fated. Slowly, this digital game drug of habit is rising due to, increasing the gap between into family. Other hand, students are not able to fully concentrate on their studies this factor, fail in a number of subjects, furthermore, pupils get setback and stress. To conclude, Playing as well as should study is extremely critical. Do not dominate these things. Parents should check their child, whether, he spends more time.
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Moreover
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live
us. That, s why they cannot do focus on other activities. That's what, the thing is bothering parents.
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Cut
off the study and being
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affected
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as
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Slowly
, this digital game drug of habit is rising due to, increasing the gap between into family. Other hand, students are not able to
fully
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, pupils
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setback and
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critical. Do not dominate these things. Parents should
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IELTS essay Today times in the games have been changed.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
207 words
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