Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Think about an animal in this unit or another animal that is similar to humans in some way what is one way its behavior is similar to and different from human behavior.

Think about an animal in this unit or another animal that is similar to humans in some way what is one way its behavior is similar to and different from human behavior. br0D6

Like humans, Chimps live in communities of several dozen animals. They organize themselves into hierarchies in which individuals know their status and behave themselves. For example, young people may lower their's heads when they see persons with higher status. Similarly, when chimpanzees approach a senior member, they try to make themselves look as small as they can. In addition, both humans and chimps prefer to cooperate and try to avoid conflict. Some people believe that chimps live in full of conflict, but the truth was exactly the reverse. In fact, chimps spend most of their time caring for their young and traveling together in small groups. Likewise, people also use social networking skills to get ahead in their life. For instance, office workers can cooperate to make a project; In that way, they carry out their ambition together. While humans and chimps are similar in some ways but different in others. People are bipedal, in contrast, chimps walk on all fours. As we know that chimps live in the forest, so they need on all four to find food and swung from branch to branch. Additionally, a study showed that chimps are between two and three-time stronger than humans. A young chimp weighing 85-pound can break an ironwood tree with two hands. No one knows where they get all that extra power but that is the interesting thing.

Like You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodylifemortalcharacterindividualchild
humans
, Chimps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in communities of several dozen animals. They organize themselves into hierarchies in which individuals know their status and behave themselves. For example
, young You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 may lower Did you mean "their" or "theirs"?theirtheirs
their's
 heads when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 persons with higher status. Similarly
, when chimpanzees approach a senior member, they try to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 themselves look as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 as they can. In addition
, both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodylifemortalcharacterindividualchild
humans
 and chimps prefer to cooperate and try to avoid conflict. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 believe that chimps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in full of conflict, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the truth was exactly the reverse. In fact, chimps spend most of their time caring for their young and traveling together in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 groups. Likewise
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 social networking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 ahead in their life. For instance
, office workers can cooperate to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a project; In that way, they carry out their ambition together. While You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodylifemortalcharacterindividualchild
humans
 and chimps are similar in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 ways This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 in others. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 are bipedal, in contrast
, chimps walk on all fours. As we know that chimps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the forest, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they need on all four to find food and swung from branch to branch. Additionally
, a study This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 that chimps are between two and three-time stronger than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodylifemortalcharacterindividualchild
humans
. A young chimp weighing 85-pound can break an ironwood tree with two hands. No one knows where they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 all that extra power This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
that is
 the interesting thing. 