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The reading and the lecture are about the decline of Torreta tyxifolia and the ways to address the problem.

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The reading and the lecture are about the decline of Torreta tyxifolia and the ways to address the problem. The author of the reading states that there are three ways in order to address the problem and provides the reasons of support. However, the lecturer states that the solutions won't be successful and refutes each of the author's support. First of all, the author mentions that they can reestablish Torreya in the same location where it thrived for many years in an area which has a specific microclimate. This microclimate is wetter and cooler that will help the plant to survive. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She states that the area which has the microclimate has been affected and its temperature is affected by changes in temperature of the larger area. Furthermore, she mentions that this has resulted in the area becoming drier and unsuitable for Torreya's growth. Secondly, the writer posits that the Torreya can be shifted to a different location, further north from Florida, where the climate is cooler. Also, since the plant has thrived in the past, relocating it to the same region could be helpful. However, the lecturer rebuts this argument. According to her, the plant, Black locust, was moved to the same region far north and it created havoc to the surrounding region. She mentions that it spread quickly and damaged other plants and trees in the same region that were on the verge of extinction. Finally, the author states that Torreya can be preserved in research centers. The reading suggests that it will be useful for the scientists to protect the species from dying as well as conducting research on it. On the other hand, the lecturer argues that in a research center, the population of the plant would be very less as compared to that in a jungle and the population won't be able to resist the diseases. The lecturer explains that in the jungle, there is a huge population of these trees that are genetically diverse and hence able to survive. But, inside a research center, without the diversity and without the large population, the species won't be able to survive.
The reading and the lecture are about the decline of
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Torreta
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tyxifolia
and the ways to address the problem. The author of the reading
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that there are three ways in order to address the problem and provides the reasons of support.
However
, the
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lecturer
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states
that the solutions won't be successful and refutes each of the author's support.

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, the author mentions that they can reestablish
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Torreya
in the same location where it thrived for
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many
years in an
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area
which has a specific microclimate. This microclimate is wetter and cooler that will
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help
the
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plant
to survive. This point
is challenged
by the
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lecturer
. She
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states
that the
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area
which has the microclimate has been
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affected
and its temperature is
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affected
by
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changes
in temperature of the larger
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area
.
Furthermore
, she mentions that this has resulted in the
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area
becoming drier and unsuitable for
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Torreya
's growth.

Secondly
, the writer posits that the
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Torreya
can
be shifted
to a
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different
location,
further
north from Florida, where the climate is cooler.
Also
, since the
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plant
has thrived in the past, relocating it to the same
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region
could be helpful.
However
, the
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lecturer
rebuts this argument. According to her, the
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plant
, Black locust, was
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moved
to the same
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region
far north and it created havoc to the surrounding
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region
. She mentions that it spread
quickly
and damaged other
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plants
and trees in the same
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region
that were on the verge of extinction.

Finally
, the author
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states
that
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Torreya
can
be preserved
in
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research
centers. The reading suggests that it will be useful for the scientists to protect the species from dying
as well
as conducting
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research
on it.
On the other hand
, the
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lecturer
argues that in a
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research
center, the
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population
of the
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plant
would be
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very
less
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as
compared to that in a jungle and the
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population
won't be able to resist the diseases. The
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lecturer
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explains
that in the jungle, there is a huge
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population
of these trees that are
genetically
diverse and
hence
able to survive.
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But
, inside a
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research
center, without the diversity and without the large
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population
, the species won't be able to survive.
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IELTS essay The reading and the lecture are about the decline of Torreta tyxifolia and the ways to address the problem.

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