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The nation you visited , decribe you enjoyed what

The nation you visited, decribe you enjoyed what eY2V
I visited mumbai in the past year. My journey to the nation was great. I would like to discuss my journey i visited india on the 20 th birthday. Mumbai is the financial capital of india. Nation is great and its culture. Visiting is grat experience. I studied in my hometown. I do my work by own. I am not dependent on anything. Not depending on anyone's is benifit to every one. Name is nikunj so its meaning is good.
I visited
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mumbai
in the past year. My journey to the nation was great. I would like to discuss my journey
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i
visited
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india
on the
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20 th
birthday. Mumbai is the financial capital of
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india
. Nation is great and its culture. Visiting is
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grat
experience. I studied in my hometown. I do my work by
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own
.
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I
am not dependent on anything. Not depending on anyone's is
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benifit
to every one. Name is
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nikunj
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so
its meaning is
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good
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IELTS essay The nation you visited, decribe you enjoyed what

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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