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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children. Give reason and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children. Give reason and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. aNOV
Today most children in the world grow up with TV. this has both advantages and disadvantages. Children can lean many interesting and valuable things from TV. There are programs that are designed specifically to teach young people. Some of them reinforce skills that children need for reading. For example, they might help children learn to read letter and common words. Or they might have actors reading or telling stories. Other programs teach children fascinating facts about the natural world or about life in other countries or about other interesting things. Through programs such as these, children can be exposed to information that they might not learn otherwise. Often I have seen children become excited about subjects they first heard about on TV. They then go on to seek out books and other sources of information about these subjects. on the other hand, there are also drawbacks to TV. For one thing, watching TV is a passive activity. Children don't participate in TV programs. They don't ask questions or tell their own opinions or choose what to do next. They just receive the information or entertainment they are given. Watching TV is also physically inactive. When children spend too much time watching TV, they don't spend enough time running and playing actively. In addition, there are a lot of programs on TV that are inappropriate for children, but children can still see them. This can be confusing and even scary for some. There are both good and bad sides to TV. One thing, however, is always true: too much of anything is never good.
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interesting and valuable things from TV. There are
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are designed
specifically
to teach young
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of them reinforce
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need for reading.
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learn to read letter and common words. Or they might have actors reading or telling stories.
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programs
teach
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fascinating facts about the natural world or about life in
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other
countries or about
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other
interesting things. Through
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programs
such as these,
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children
can
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to information that they might not learn
otherwise
.
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I have
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children
become excited about subjects they
first
heard about on TV. They then go on to seek out books and
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other
sources of information about these subjects.
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on
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hand, there are
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drawbacks to TV. For one thing, watching TV is a passive activity.
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don't participate in TV
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opinions or choose what to do
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receive the information or entertainment they are
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spend too much time watching TV, they don't spend
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time running and playing
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.
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, there are
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programs
on TV that are inappropriate for
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children
,
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still
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them. This can be confusing and even scary for
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. There are both
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good
and
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sides to TV. One thing,
however
, is always true: too much of anything is never
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good
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IELTS essay Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children. Give reason and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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