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THE CONSUMPTION OF THE WORLD’S RESOURCES (OIL AND WATER ETC) IS INCREASING AT A DANGEROUS RATE. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES AND SOLUTION.

THE CONSUMPTION OF THE WORLD’S RESOURCES (OIL AND WATER ETC) IS INCREASING AT A DANGEROUS RATE. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES AND SOLUTION? v. 2
A very common debate is going on proper utilisation of natural resources available on Earth these resources demand is increasing at alarming rate. Common resources like petroleum and water. It can be categorised into category renewable ( water) and nonrenewable ( oil). Therefore first I would be discussing the major causes related of this problem and then suggest some handy solutions for this. One of the major cause behind this problem is less awareness in society to this global issues. Which are wasting water and more usage of fossil fuels. That's why it is a major concern for the world. people have a knowledge but their ignorance is taking us close to disaster. They think earth has 70% of water but they are unaware that only 1% is suitable for drinking. Hence more the demand more will be the consumption. another reason link to more demand and usage is continuous growth in population. It's a basic knowledge as population will increase the demand will automatically increase. Moreover this is a very serious problem which is linked to farmers in efficient irrigation techniques for farming their crops. There was a shocking article in newspaper for wasting of water around the globe which was more than 45 trillion gallons. I also have a habit of opening taps while brushing which which results in loss of many gallons of water per day. on the other hand use of fossil fuels features a lot of problems like carbon emission, increase in breathing patients and global warming. so we have to step up and limit its usage and move towards a change which is used using of renewable resources. Talking about solutions very good example is rainwater harvesting system which utilizes the rainwater efficiently which could be used for household purpose and watering plants. We are very good example in front us is that in each house of no way they have this system installed already, this shows that they are concerned for this global scarcity of water. we could avoid use of washing plates with hand and use effective dishwashers which saves lot of water. On the other hand we as a human beings have a responsibility of protecting our environment. next chapter we as a responsible human can take is using electric cars and photovoltaic devices in place of using these fossil fuels. We can also prefer use of cycles for short distance travel instead of taking diesel cars. Initial it's our earth and our responsibility to take care of our nature this solution can put a hold over this issue but if we don't apply in our daily life this problem will still continue with us.
A
very
common debate is going on proper
utilisation
of natural resources available on Earth these resources
demand
is increasing at alarming rate. Common resources like petroleum and
water
. It can be
categorised
into category renewable
(
water)
and nonrenewable
(
oil).
Therefore
first
I would be discussing the major causes related of this
problem
and then suggest
some
handy solutions for this.

One of the major cause behind this
problem
is less awareness in society to this global issues. Which are wasting
water
and more usage of fossil fuels. That's why it is a major concern for the world.
people
have a knowledge
but
their ignorance is taking us close to disaster. They
think
earth has 70% of
water
but
they are unaware that
only
1% is suitable for drinking.
Hence
more the
demand
more will be the consumption.
another
reason link to more
demand
and usage is continuous growth in population. It's
a basic knowledge
as population will increase the
demand
will
automatically
increase.
Moreover
this is a
very
serious
problem
which
is linked
to farmers in efficient irrigation techniques for farming their crops. There was a shocking article in newspaper for wasting of
water
around the globe which was more than 45 trillion gallons. I
also
have a habit of opening taps while brushing
which which
results in loss of
many
gallons of
water
per day.
on
the other hand
use
of fossil fuels features
a lot of
problems
like carbon emission, increase in breathing patients and global warming.
so
we
have to
step up and limit its usage and
move
towards a
change
which is
used
using of renewable resources.

Talking about solutions
very
good
example is rainwater harvesting system which utilizes the rainwater
efficiently
which could be
used
for household purpose and watering plants. We are
very
good
example in front us is that in each
house
of no way they have this system installed already, this
shows
that they
are concerned
for this global scarcity of
water
.
we
could avoid
use
of washing plates with hand and
use
effective dishwashers which saves
lot of
water
.
On the other hand
we as a human
beings
have a responsibility of protecting our environment.
next
chapter we as a responsible human can take is using electric cars and photovoltaic devices in place of using these fossil fuels. We can
also
prefer
use
of cycles for short distance travel
instead
of taking diesel cars.

Initial it's our earth and our responsibility to take care of our nature this solution can put a hold over this issue
but
if we don't apply in our daily life this
problem
will
still
continue with us.
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IELTS essay THE CONSUMPTION OF THE WORLD’S RESOURCES (OIL AND WATER ETC) IS INCREASING AT A DANGEROUS RATE. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES AND SOLUTION.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
444 words
5.5
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