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Technology is rapidly changing the lives of people around the world and it has been utilized at a massive level. It has become one of the crucial parts of our lives. In this current era, the schools have also started providing electronic devices and books and other materials are getting replaced. This could be beneficial considering the requirement of the current education system but the excess use of it may lead to some serious consequences. Considering the developed educational patterns there are a number of advantages if printed material is replaced by tablets or laptop it will reduce paper consumption. which will help to protect the environment. Also, it has been noticed that the exams and assignments have created a lot of mental pressure if this is getting replaced the student may get relief and they could sharpen their mind without having a fear of exams. Replacing books will be helpful as they will not have to carry heavy bags they could easily carry their device anywhere and

Technology is rapidly changing the lives of people around the world and it has been utilized at a massive level. It has become one of the crucial parts of our lives. In this current era, the schools have also started providing electronic devices and books and other materials are getting replaced. This could be beneficial considering the requirement of the current education system but the excess use of it may lead to some serious consequences. Considering the developed educational patterns there are a number of advantages if printed material is replaced by tablets or laptop it will reduce paper consumption. which will help to protect the environment. Also, it has been noticed that the exams and assignments have created a lot of mental pressure if this is getting replaced the student may get relief and they could sharpen their mind without having a fear of exams. Replacing books will be helpful as they will not have to carry heavy bags they could easily carry their device anywhere and they can also attend the classes online. There are some demerits that cannot be neglected. I believe that providing students with electronic gadgets for education purpose at an early age cannot be beneficial. This can increase their screen time. In fact, instead of studying the gadget can be used for other purposes. Due to this, they may get distracted easily students may play games along with that there is a possibility that students may use the material which is unsuitable for school. To sum up, I do not agree that replacing printed books and other material would be advantageous but also it is not an absolute necessity. If the schools are concerned about the students they should definitely continue the same way of education.

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