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It has long been said that the greatest wealth is health and in order to obtain a good physical condition, one should always maintain healthy eating habits. Having balanced nutrition leads to a long and healthy life. It is essential to keep a balanced and healthy diet full of proteins, fibres and minerals. But these days due to a stressful lifestyle keeping a healthy diet is getting difficult. To achieve and maintain a luxurious lifestyle people have been working relentlessly. However, due to the modern lifestyle, it is tough for individuals to maintain a healthy diet. There could be multiple reasons such as hectic schedules, tight deadlines because of which it is not possible to have meals on time. I believe that these days the consumption of processed food has also been increased as it saves time and also indulges the test buds. The main reason behind maintaining a healthy diet is everyone is occupied with the other aspects and somewhere to In my opinion, in this fast pace world

It has long been said that the greatest wealth is health and in order to obtain a good physical condition, one should always maintain healthy eating habits. Having balanced nutrition leads to a long and healthy life. It is essential to keep a balanced and healthy diet full of proteins, fibres and minerals. But these days due to a stressful lifestyle keeping a healthy diet is getting difficult. To achieve and maintain a luxurious lifestyle people have been working relentlessly. However, due to the modern lifestyle, it is tough for individuals to maintain a healthy diet. There could be multiple reasons such as hectic schedules, tight deadlines because of which it is not possible to have meals on time. I believe that these days the consumption of processed food has also been increased as it saves time and also indulges the test buds. The main reason behind maintaining a healthy diet is everyone is occupied with the other aspects and somewhere to In my opinion, in this fast pace world 7bJy
It has long been said that the greatest wealth is health and in order to obtain a good physical condition, one should always maintain healthy eating habits. Having balanced nutrition leads to a long and healthy life. It is essential to keep a balanced and healthy diet full of proteins, fibres and minerals. But these days due to a stressful lifestyle keeping a healthy diet is getting difficult. To achieve and maintain a luxurious lifestyle people have been working relentlessly. However, due to the modern lifestyle, it is tough for individuals to maintain a healthy diet. There could be multiple reasons such as hectic schedules, tight deadlines because of which it is not possible to have meals on time. I believe that these days the consumption of processed food has also been increased as it saves time and also indulges the test buds. The main reason behind maintaining a healthy diet is everyone is occupied with the other aspects and somewhere to In my opinion, in this fast pace world, having a nutritional diet could lead to a healthy lifestyle. this could by focusing more on ourselves and once should give themselves ample amount of time from their hectic schedule. planning makes it easier like scheduling the meals. I think not only proper eating habits are a part of a healthy diet but also doing regular exercise or meditation would be helpful to maintain a regular diet To sum up, I see the befits of maintaining a healthy diet. which could be difficult in the beginning but it takes time to get used to healthy habits. Hence instead of focusing on the result focusing on the process would be helpful to achieve and maintain a healthy diet, and have a healthy life.
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IELTS essay It has long been said that the greatest wealth is health and in order to obtain a good physical condition, one should always maintain healthy eating habits. Having balanced nutrition leads to a long and healthy life. It is essential to keep a balanced and healthy diet full of proteins, fibres and minerals. But these days due to a stressful lifestyle keeping a healthy diet is getting difficult. To achieve and maintain a luxurious lifestyle people have been working relentlessly. However, due to the modern lifestyle, it is tough for individuals to maintain a healthy diet. There could be multiple reasons such as hectic schedules, tight deadlines because of which it is not possible to have meals on time. I believe that these days the consumption of processed food has also been increased as it saves time and also indulges the test buds. The main reason behind maintaining a healthy diet is everyone is occupied with the other aspects and somewhere to In my opinion, in this fast pace world

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4 paragraphs
292 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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