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I want to talk about the expensive watches I bought for myself. This purchase was really wrong. Because I was under pressure from various media and advertisements and I got it because of its famous brand, while this expensive watch is not significantly different from my other watches and only its price was higher. 3 years ago, in an online advertisement, I saw this watch and decided to order it from the online store of Digi Kala. I thought this watch is very beautiful and unique. But when I saw it, I realized that I was wrong, and it was completely different from the ads I saw on the Internet. It is interesting to know that I have used that watch less than 5 times so far and I have only paid a lot of money for it. When I ordered it, I was in a hurry and thought I must buy this product while I was only affected by the psychological advertising of that brand and now I regret buying it.
I want to talk about the expensive
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famous
brand, while this expensive
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watch
is not
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different
from my other
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watches
and
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only
its price was higher.

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saw
this
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watch
and decided to order it from the online store of
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Digi
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Kala
. I
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thought
this
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very
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beautiful
and unique.
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But
when I
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saw
it, I realized that I was
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wrong
, and it was completely
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different
from the ads I
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saw
on the Internet.

It is interesting to know that I have
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used
that
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watch
less than 5 times
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so
far and I have
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only
paid
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a lot of
money for it.

When I ordered it, I was in a hurry and
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thought
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this product while I was
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affected
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I regret buying it.
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IELTS essay Talk about an expensive thing you bought recentl

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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