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Study alone or with a teacher

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In my opinion study alone is more efficient than study with a teacher. We are living in the heyday of technology, accessing to context about all kind of subjects is not a big deal anymore. In case that you want to study alone, for figuring out your questions and unclear subjects you have to research through internet about them, in this case you get more information than you need and it cause preventing mistakes. therefore, variety ideas and methods in order to solve the problems are available. Even for solving a math problem that always has one right answer, different methods are teaching in books and you don’t have to force yourself to understand the method that your teacher know, you can try other methods and reach the right answer as well. Considering study with a teacher, its show you the straight direction to the solutions so you don’t need to spend much time during internet for researching. Therefore, teachers share their experience with their students so you know more than an amateur. But at the end you just know as much as your teachers know, or even less. Going beyond others knowledge and being creative need self-study and trying find solutions in your own way. Being totally dependent to teachers for study, doesn’t make you a unique and creative person. I’ve been found the advantages of researching and trying to find solutions by yourself in the most courses outweigh the disadvantages, even if it takes more time.
In my opinion
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alone is more efficient than
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with a
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. We are living in the heyday of technology, accessing to context about all kind of subjects is not a
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big
deal anymore.

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alone, for figuring out your questions and unclear subjects you
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have to
research through internet about them,
in this case
you
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get
more information than you need and it
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preventing mistakes.
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therefore
, variety
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ideas
and
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methods
in order to solve the problems are available. Even for solving a math problem that always has one right answer,
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different
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methods
are teaching in books and you don’t
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have to
force yourself to understand the
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method
that your
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teacher
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know
, you can try other
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methods
and reach the right answer
as well
.

Considering
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with a
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show
you the straight direction to the solutions
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you don’t need to spend much time during internet for researching.
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,
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share their experience with their students
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more than an amateur.
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end
you
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as much as your
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, or even less.

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way. Being
totally
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, doesn’t
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make
you a unique and creative person. I’ve
been found
the advantages of researching and trying to find solutions by yourself in the most courses outweigh the disadvantages, even if it takes more time.
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IELTS essay Study alone or with a teacher

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
248 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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