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Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common.WHAT ARE THE CAUSES? What solutions can you suggest?

Stress related illness are becoming increasingly common. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES? What solutions can you suggest? oRDxg

PRESENT LIFE HAS BECOME MORE FAST AND HECTIC THAN A DECADE AGO. THIS AFFECT THE HEALTH OF THE INDIVIDUALS SUCH AS DEPRESSION FROM STRESS. THERE ARE A MYRIAD OF CAUSES AND LESS NUMBER OF SOLUTIONS AVAILABLE TO THE PERSON FOR THIS ISSUE. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS H0W BEING BUSY ALL THE DAY CAN FORM STRESS AND HOW YOGA CONTRIBUTE TO RELASE THE STRESS AND MAKE AN INDIVIDUAL TENSION FREE. THE PRIME REASON OF INCREASED STRESS IS THE BUSY LIFE AND NOT GIVING ENOUGH TO THE MIND TO RELAX. THIS BUSY MIND UNABLE TO LET THE PERSON SIT FOR A WHILE AND MAKE HIM/HER INTRICATE WITH ALL THE THINGS SURROUNDED. CONSEQUENTLY, THIS CREATS THE MORE TENSION TO COMPLETE THE DAILY TASK AND AT THE END ONE WILL GETS THE MENTAL ILLNESS. MOREOVER, THEY DO NOT ORGANISED THE PROPER TIME FOT BODY TO RELAX. FOR INSTANCE, ACCORDING TO UK UNIVERSITY SURVEY, 70% OF THE PEOPLE HAVING A STRESS RELATED DISEASE BECAUSE OF THE LACK OF TIME TO ALLOW BODY TO RECOVER FORM THE DAILY WORK. HOWEVER, THIS MENACE WILL BE SOLVED WITH YOGA PRACTICE. WHEN AN INDIVIDUAL PRACTICE YOGA, HUMAN BODY RELEASE SOME STRESS RELIEVE HORMONES THAT KEEPS MIND CALM AND FOCUSED. THIS CALMESS RESOLVE THE MENTAL PRESSURE AND DISTRIBUTE THE POSITIVITY INNSIDE THE HMAN BODY. FOR EXAMPLE, INDIAN MEDICAL COMMITY DID A SURVEY LAST YEAR AND REVEALED THAT 60% OF THE INDIAN PUBLIC ARE HEALTHY BECAUSE OFF THE YOGA TRADITION SINCE THE ANCIENT TIME SPREADED AMONG THE FOLKS. IN CONCLUSION, WHEN YOU HAVE A GOOD HEALTH, NO WORRIES CAN AFFECT YOUR FITNESS LEVEL AND THE YOG IS THE BEST TO DO SO. BUT, THIS RELY ON THE INNDIVIDUAL'S THINKING AND THE WAY HE THE SERIOUSENESS OF THE WELLNESS. THEREFORE, I SUGGEST THAT IF PEOPLE DO YOGA, THEY WOULD OBTAIN A DISEASE FREE LIVELIHOOD.

PRESENT LIFE HAS BECOME MORE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
FAST
 AND HECTIC THAN A DECADE AGO. THIS AFFECT THE HEALTH OF THE INDIVIDUALS SUCH AS DEPRESSION FROM You use this word too often, consider replacing it withweight
STRESS
. THERE ARE A Possible agreement error. Did you mean "myriads"?Myriads
MYRIAD
 OF CAUSES AND LESS NUMBER OF SOLUTIONS AVAILABLE TO THE PERSON FOR THIS ISSUE. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS H0W BEING BUSY ALL THE DAY CAN FORM You use this word too often, consider replacing it withweight
STRESS
 AND HOW YOGA CONTRIBUTE TO Possible spelling mistake found.ReleaseRelateRelapseREL ASE
RELASE
 THE You use this word too often, consider replacing it withweight
STRESS
 AND This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
MAKE
 AN INDIVIDUAL TENSION FREE.

THE PRIME REASON OF INCREASED You use this word too often, consider replacing it withweight
STRESS
 IS THE BUSY LIFE AND NOT GIVING This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
ENOUGH
 TO THE MIND TO RELAX. THIS BUSY MIND UNABLE TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
LET
 THE PERSON SIT FOR A WHILE AND This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
MAKE
 HIM/HER INTRICATE WITH ALL THE THINGS SURROUNDED. CONSEQUENTLY
, THIS Possible spelling mistake found.CreateCreatesTreatsCrestsGreatsCroats
CREATS
 THE MORE TENSION TO COMPLETE THE DAILY TASK AND AT THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
END
 ONE WILL The verb 'WILL' requires the base form of the verb: "get"Get
GETS
 THE MENTAL ILLNESS. MOREOVER
, THEY DO NOT After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "organise"?Organise
ORGANISED
 THE PROPER TIME Possible spelling mistake found.ForNotGotFootHotLot
FOT
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BODY
 TO RELAX. FOR INSTANCE
, ACCORDING TO UK UNIVERSITY SURVEY, 70% OF THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 HAVING A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withweight
STRESS
 RELATED DISEASE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
BECAUSE
 OF THE LACK OF TIME TO This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
ALLOW
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BODY
 TO RECOVER FORM THE DAILY WORK.

HOWEVER
, THIS MENACE WILL BE SOLVED
 WITH YOGA PRACTICE. WHEN AN INDIVIDUAL PRACTICE YOGA, HUMAN You use this word too often, consider replacing it withframecarcasstorso
BODY
 RELEASE This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
SOME
Did you mean "stresses"?Stresses
STRESS
 RELIEVE HORMONES THAT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
KEEPS
 MIND CALM AND FOCUSED. THIS Possible spelling mistake found.CalmnessCalmestCALM ESS
CALMESS
 RESOLVE THE MENTAL PRESSURE AND DISTRIBUTE THE POSITIVITY Possible spelling mistake found.InsideINNS IDE
INNSIDE
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HMAN
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BODY
. FOR EXAMPLE
, INDIAN MEDICAL Possible spelling mistake found.CommitCommitsComityCOMMIT Y
COMMITY
 DID A SURVEY LAST YEAR AND REVEALED THAT 60% OF THE INDIAN PUBLIC ARE HEALTHY This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
BECAUSE
 OFF THE YOGA TRADITION SINCE THE ANCIENT TIME Possible spelling mistake found.Spreader
SPREADED
 AMONG THE FOLKS.

IN CONCLUSION
, WHEN YOU HAVE A This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
GOOD
 HEALTH, NO WORRIES CAN AFFECT YOUR FITNESS LEVEL AND THE Possible spelling mistake found.YouDogLogFogYogaBog
YOG
 IS THE BEST It appears that a hyphen is missing.TO-DO
TO DO
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SO
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
BUT
, The verb 'RELY' is plural. Did you mean: "THIS relies"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?THIS relies
THIS RELY
 ON THE Possible spelling mistake found.Individual
INNDIVIDUAL
'S THINKING AND THE WAY HE THE Possible spelling mistake found.Seriousness
SERIOUSENESS
 OF THE WELLNESS. THEREFORE
, I SUGGEST THAT IF This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 DO YOGA, THEY WOULD OBTAIN A DISEASE FREE LIVELIHOOD. 