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Write about the following topic. Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most of the universities today provide their courses on the internet so the students can study from online. In my point of view there will be having both advantage and disadvantage will be there. Now a days education system was developed well and there teaching skills was improved. Student was understand the subject very easy. They are using internet and learning what subject they need. Academy's also giving there courses by internet this will help the study's to knowing the subject by sitting at there homes only. There are also giving live sections classes through the internet. In the year 2020 due to covid-19 all the universities, schools and collages will be closed for many month at that time all the students are learning the subject through the online courses and live class. at that pandemic period online courses are very useful. Not only that people can learning course from any where and they can study deeply. one of the main negitive development was they are many courses for money not for free learning we have to purchase that courses to learn but moreover that the will be a same courses for free also at some websites. For example, In you tube there are number of recorded courses will be there with a detail explanation many people today most courses learning from the you tube only the courses are very free to learning instead of that no one will try to think to buy course form online. overall, learning subject from internet is very use full development and for free of cost that was the most advantage for the afford less people to gaining knowledge
Most of the universities
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provide their
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courses
on the internet
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so
the students can study from online. In my point of view there will be having both advantage and disadvantage will be there.

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Now
a days education system
was developed
well and there teaching
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skills
was
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improved
. Student was
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understand
the
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subject
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very
easy. They are using internet and
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learning
what
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subject
they need.

Academy's
also
giving there
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courses
by internet this will
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help
the study's
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to knowing
the
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subject
by sitting at
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there
homes
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only
. There are
also
giving
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live
sections classes through the internet.

In the year 2020 due to
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covid-19
all the universities, schools and collages will
be closed
for
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many month
at that time all the students are
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learning
the
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subject
through the online
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courses
and
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live
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class
.
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at
that pandemic period online
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courses
are
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very
useful. Not
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only
that
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people
can
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learning
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course
from any
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where and
they can study
deeply
.

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one
of the main
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negitive
development was they are
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many
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courses
for money not for
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free
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learning
we
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have to
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purchase
that
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courses
to learn
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but
moreover
that
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the
will be a same
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courses
for
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free
also
at
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some
websites.
For example
, In
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you tube
there are number of recorded
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courses
will be there with a detail explanation
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many
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people
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today
most
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courses
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learning
from the
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you tube
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only
the
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courses
are
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very
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free
to
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learning
instead
of that no one will try to
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think
to
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buy
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course
form online.

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overall
,
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learning
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subject
from internet is
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very
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use
full development and for
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free
of cost that was the most advantage for
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the afford
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less
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people
to gaining knowledge
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IELTS essay Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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