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Do you feel people nowadays post comments basis on religion.

Do you feel people nowadays post comments basis on religion. RN0X8
Sometime, i really feel bad that we are living in a nation where we judge people by their religion. Irrefutably, many of you found it inappropriate post, but that's the bitter truth of our country. Whenever I scroll Facebook I found most of the posts are based on racism, which really forced me to think that it is really a secular country. . . . Secularism doesn't mean to say irrelevant comments or to Express inappropriate thoughts. . . If we get United the nation gets United. Stop spreading racism posts. It internally damages our national strength.
Sometime,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
really
feel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
that we are living in a nation where we judge
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
by their religion.
Irrefutably
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
of you found it inappropriate post,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
that's the bitter truth of our country.

Whenever I scroll Facebook I found most of the posts
are based
on racism, which
really
forced me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that it is
really
a secular country.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Secularism doesn't mean to say irrelevant comments or to Express inappropriate thoughts.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
United the nation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
United.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Stop
spreading racism posts. It
internally
damages our national strength.

IELTS essay Do you feel people nowadays post comments basis on religion.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
97 words
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