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Some say, drinking 10 liters of water a day is good for health and digestion but others say we are giving over burden on the urinary system during cold season. Substantiate this with 250 words

Some say, drinking 10 liters of water a day is good for health and digestion but others say we are giving over burden on the urinary system during cold season. Substantiate this with 250 words oVPlV
Drinking 10 liters of water every day is said be good for health. Health benefits of drinking water ranges from weight loss to keeping our kidneys safe. Our human body is made up of 60% water, and our blood is 90% water. Let the season be winter, summer or rainy the quantity of water required for our body has to be consumed. Water is required for keeping our skin healthy and hydrated. Our skin is the same during all seasons, so the water consumption level should not vary according to the season. Our skin requires more water during winter because skin becomes dry and requires moisture. Water is vital for having our bones and joints active and healthy. In winter and rainy season our bones and joints become numb leading to pain. Hence, drinking warm water relives the numbness and pain and makes the cartilage work efficiently. Water is necessary for kidney, liver, pancreas, intestine for better functionality. Water flushes out body waste and keeps our vital organs safe. Our organs have same functionality and energy whether it is rainy or winter or summer, so same quantity of water consumption must be practiced. And our body has to flush out waste in order to keep kidneys safe throughout the year. So, drinking water has to be done during any part of the year. Urinary tract gets infected because of less water intake. Urinary tract gets overburdened due to less water intake, more the water, less the efforts the body has to take to flush out waste. Urinary Tract infection does not stop in itself it spreads out, kidneys are damaged, intestine cannot digest food, intake of solid food reduces, blood pumping to heart gets hit, heart function becomes slow and finally the results are fatal. Water intake quantity differs from one human to another human body as per the body requirement. But the intake of water should not be reduced and intake should be continuous.
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10 liters of
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water
every day
is said
be
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good
for health. Health benefits of
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drinking
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water
ranges from weight loss to keeping our
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kidneys
safe.

Our human
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body
is made
up of 60%
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water
, and our blood is 90%
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water
.
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Let
the
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season
be
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winter
, summer or rainy the quantity of
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water
required for our
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body
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has to
be consumed
.

Water
is required
for keeping our
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skin
healthy and hydrated. Our
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skin
is the same during all
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seasons
,
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so
the
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water
consumption level should not vary according to the
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season
. Our
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skin
requires more
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water
during
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winter
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because
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skin
becomes dry and requires moisture.

Water is vital for having our bones and joints active and healthy. In
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winter
and rainy
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season
our bones and joints become numb leading to pain.
Hence
,
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drinking
warm
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water
relives the numbness and pain and
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makes
the cartilage work
efficiently
.

Water is necessary for
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kidney
, liver, pancreas, intestine for better functionality.
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Water
flushes out
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body
waste and
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keeps
our vital organs safe. Our organs have same functionality and energy whether it is rainy or
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winter
or summer,
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so
same quantity of
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water
consumption
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must
be practiced
. And our
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body
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has to
flush out waste in order to
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keep
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kidneys
safe throughout the year.
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So
,
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drinking
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water
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has to
be done
during any part of the year.

Urinary tract
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gets
infected
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because
of less
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water
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intake
. Urinary tract
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gets
overburdened due to less
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water
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intake
, more the
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water
, less the efforts the
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body
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has to
take to flush out waste.
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Urinary
Tract infection does not
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stop
in itself it spreads out,
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kidneys
are damaged
, intestine cannot digest food,
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intake
of solid food
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reduces
, blood pumping to heart
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gets
hit, heart function becomes slow and
finally
the results are fatal.

Water
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intake
quantity differs from one human to another human
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body
as per the
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body
requirement.
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But
the
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intake
of
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water
should not be
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reduced
and
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intake
should be continuous.
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IELTS essay Some say, drinking 10 liters of water a day is good for health and digestion but others say we are giving over burden on the urinary system during cold season. Substantiate this with 250 words

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7 paragraphs
325 words
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