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Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but other people claim that it is the individual s responsibility Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but other people claim that it is the individual s responsibility Discuss both views and give your opinion E3VEL
Education and health is essentiol for us. This eseentiol service should provided by goverment. i belive that this is goverment responsiblity not a indevidual firstly, if educaton and healthcare is indivedual responiblity it have litle bit benifit becuse we are paid in own money. peopole more care of them self. students do more attenation in them study. like private schools gives persnol attention on their students. They improve her all type of skill. Private hospital are more careful them paisent. In private hospital all facilty are avilable. on the other hand, in some country healt insurance is compalsry. and goverment take tax form citizen of country. just for example in usa and canada indivdual health is compalsry. If goverment take education responciblity for the student so they are free from financial burden To conclude, goverment shold provide all esantiol service for them citizon
Education and health is
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for us. This
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eseentiol
service should
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provided
by
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goverment
.
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i
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belive
that this is
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goverment
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responsiblity
not
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a
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indevidual


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firstly
, if
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educaton
and healthcare is
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indivedual
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responiblity
it
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have
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litle
bit
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benifit
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becuse
we
are paid
in
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own
money.
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peopole
more care of them self.
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students
do more
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attenation
in them study.
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like
private schools gives
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persnol
attention on their students. They
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improve
her all type of
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skill
. Private hospital are more careful them
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paisent
. In private hospital all
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facilty
are
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avilable
.

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on
the other hand, in
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some
country
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healt
insurance is
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compalsry
.
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and
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goverment
take tax form citizen of country.
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just
for example
in
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usa
and
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canada


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indivdual
health is
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compalsry
. If
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goverment
take education
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responciblity
for the student
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so
they are free from financial
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burden


To conclude
,
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goverment
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shold
provide all
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esantiol
service for them
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citizon

IELTS essay Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but other people claim that it is the individual s responsibility Discuss both views and give your opinion

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