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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives other think that adult life brings more happiness inspite of greater responsibilities discuss both these views and give your own openion

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives other think that adult life brings more happiness inspite of greater responsibilities discuss both these views and give your own openion qKxD
Firstly I discuss with teenagers. When teenagers lives are happy time in huge people. since in the old age people are utilized on playing in mobiles phone and other gadgets. mobile phone are very harmful. It enervate the brain. Teenages are dis interested in studying brilliant people's are stag out of egregious thing while parents are fundamentally explain the teenages. The kids are preverticate the parentsSecoundly adult life many parents aargue that adult life become happy but most of the adult are icnoclast why I laconic the adult mostly they are giving priorities to purchasing tv fridge washingmachine ac etc most adults are frugle and persimoniousI concluded my essay neither be teenages nor the adult both life's are ambivalent
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teenagers
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teenagers
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lives
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people
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since
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age
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people
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phone are
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Teenages
are
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dis
interested in studying brilliant
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teenages
. The kids are
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preverticate
the
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parentsSecoundly
adult life
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parents
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that adult life become happy
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but
most of the adult are
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mostly
they are giving priorities to purchasing
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tv
fridge
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washingmachine
ac etc most
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adults
are
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frugle
and
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persimoniousI
concluded my essay neither be
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teenages
nor the adult both
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life's
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ambivalent
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IELTS essay Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people's lives other think that adult life brings more happiness inspite of greater responsibilities discuss both these views and give your own openion

Essay
  American English
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118 words
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