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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give own opinion. v.4

There are split opinion regarding child's Development. Many people conceive a notion that gardian have to train the children to be respectable member of a society, whereas other group of thinker believe that school has capability to learn, both has its own pros and cons. Therefore before giving my opinion both the view point must be analysed further in the ensuing paragraphs. Analysing the formal view, the foremost argument the put forth is that parents are always of first teacher of child's life. Most of the children learn from their parents. Parents can shape the mind of the children because they can teach moral values, importance of life, how to become a successful in life. Furthermore, on the second reason is that, In spite of fighting, the parent teach how to become a respected member of society. Public behaviour and facing challenges are learnt from parents. People believe that parents are responsible for the children's future. On the contrary, the later view suggest that schools are the most ideal place for young child to learn something because teacher have ability to influence the child's physiology rather than parents. Moreover, more responsibility on school to give attention on Child's academics. Teachers and schools should drill morality, discipline, methodology and attitude to the life and work. In conclusion. I believe that all the member of the society that include parents as well as teachers of the academic are responsible to make children better human. Although It is not responsibility of only one person, It is the responsibility of whole society to make children responsible.
There
are split
opinion regarding
child's
Development.
Many
people
conceive a notion that gardian
have to
train the
children
to be respectable member of a
society
, whereas other group of thinker believe that
school
has capability to learn, both has its
own
pros and cons.
Therefore
before
giving my opinion both the view point
must
be analysed
further
in the ensuing paragraphs.

Analysing the formal view, the foremost argument the put forth is that
parents
are always of
first
teacher
of
child's
life
. Most of the
children
learn from their
parents
.
Parents
can shape the mind of the
children
because
they can teach moral values, importance of
life
, how to become a successful in
life
.
Furthermore
, on the second reason is that,
In spite of
fighting, the
parent
teach how to become a respected member of
society
. Public behaviour and facing challenges
are learnt
from
parents
.
People
believe that
parents
are responsible for the children's future.

On the contrary
, the later view suggest that
schools
are the most ideal place for young child to learn something
because
teacher
have ability to influence the
child's
physiology
rather
than
parents
.
Moreover
, more responsibility on
school
to give attention on
Child's
academics.
Teachers
and
schools
should drill morality, discipline, methodology and attitude to the
life
and work.

In conclusion
. I believe that all the member of the
society
that include
parents
as well
as
teachers
of the academic are responsible to
make
children
better human. Although It is not responsibility of
only
one person, It is the responsibility of whole
society
to
make
children
responsible.
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IELTS essay Some people think parents should teach the children how to be good member of the society other, However, believe the school is the place to learn this.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
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