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Some people think that more plants should be grown in cities and towns instead of building more house .do you agree or disagree?

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It is widely contended fact of jet set age that a few public envision that more plants ought be increase in size in cities and towns. i do completely agree with with former school of thought. To begin with, there are multitudinous reason, why I do agree with former play an instrumental role in everyone life such as wild life and human life etcetera. in fact burgeoning in urban cities have become a serious problem in 21 st century. for example the overpopulation of India has been increasing in the cutting edge era. many individuals move the rural areas for finding a jobs in urban areas. A mommoth problem for a nation.
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contended fact of jet set age that a few public envision that more plants
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ought be
increase in size in cities and towns.
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with, there are multitudinous reason, why I do
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fact burgeoning in urban cities have become a serious problem in
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21 st
century.
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the rural areas for finding a jobs in urban areas. A
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IELTS essay Some people think that more plants should be grown in cities and towns instead of building more house.

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