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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. X1XY
Sports play a vital role in globalization as they bring many countries together on a common platform. Any country seeking an opportunity to hold an event of International recognition invites different opinions from the people in a positive as well as in a negative way. Only one school of thought cannot stand out in such a circumstance. Undoubtedly, events of this type of dimension bring home a prestigious word. These moments on one hand display the country's competency in managing such a world-class event and on the other hand, opens doors for new chances of employment, though temporary, and unify the resources in the common interest of the host country to showcase the best they have. Apart from this, the country's development is reflected which strengthens the position on the global platform and develops trust, and in effect benefits the tourism of the host country. On the contrary, some people look at such events as irrelevant as they are not directly adding to the country's economy. There is also thought that the crucial areas are devoided of the resources as in human resource, time as well as a financial one. The huge structures which are designed and developed are totally useless once the show is over. The life is also disturbed in the selected areas of interest where the setups are planned and executed. As it is believed that there is a mid-way out of doing things, one can be rational in taking up such decisions of the international levels, keeping in mind the future growth perspectives as well as the country's resources which can be utilized in the wisest ways. For instance, the Commonwealth Games held in India outstood in every way and were way more successful than any other event of the same recognition not only for the execution which was really flawless but for the planning of after event consequences. All the establishments were reused in a way or the other and also beautified the place itself. To conclude, it can be stated that irrespective of the opinions related to the holding of a sporting event in one's country, the wise decisions can bridge both the school of thoughts. Comments:
Sports play a vital role in globalization as they bring
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together on a common platform. Any
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country
seeking an opportunity to hold an
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event
of International recognition invites
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opinions from the
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people
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cannot stand out in such a circumstance.

Undoubtedly
,
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events
of this type of dimension bring home a prestigious word. These moments on one hand display the
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country's
competency in managing such a world-
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class
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event
and
on the other hand
, opens doors for new chances of employment, though temporary, and unify the resources in the common interest of the host
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country
to showcase the best they have. Apart from this, the
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country's
development
is reflected
which strengthens the position on the global platform and develops trust, and in effect benefits the tourism of the host country.

On the contrary
,
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some
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people
look at such
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events
as irrelevant as they are not
directly
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country's
economy. There is
also
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thought
that the crucial areas are
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devoided
of the resources as in human
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resource
, time
as well
as a financial one. The huge structures which
are designed
and developed are
totally
useless once the
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show
is over. The life is
also
disturbed in the selected areas of interest where the setups
are planned
and executed.

As it
is believed
that there is a mid-way out of doing things, one can be rational in taking up such decisions of the international levels, keeping in mind the future growth perspectives
as well
as the
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country's
resources which can
be utilized
in the wisest ways.
For instance
, the Commonwealth Games held in India
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outstood
in every way and were way more successful than any other
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event
of the same recognition not
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only
for the execution which was
really
flawless
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for the planning of after
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event
consequences. All the establishments
were reused
in a way or the other and
also
beautified the place itself.

To conclude
, it can
be stated
that irrespective of the opinions related to the holding of a sporting
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event
in one's
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country
, the wise decisions can bridge both the school of thoughts.

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IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

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