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Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. RaDk
Many people beleave that government have to invest more money on sport facilities for top sportsmens. As for me, I agree with others, who bealives we need to pay money for sport facilities for ordinary citizens. One hand, many people have always loved professional sportsmens. They like to watch sport competitions, like football or hockey. This people suppouse, government have to build big stadiums and other expensive sport facilities. I have a neighbour. He is football fanat. He has always complain to me about old stadium in our city. He wish the government will built new one. On the over hand, lot of people needs sport facilities near theirs houses. I support this point of view. I bellieve we ned to invest more money in small stadiums and work out facilities just near ours houses. Me and my wive are loving to do fitness, but there are no space to do this near our home. I think, if government had built new swimming pool and work out stadium near me, there would not been so many drunk fat people around us. I think my neighbours will do some exersises on this work out stadium and therefore will be more healthy. This will reduce the load of government health care institut and therefore we will save more money. To conclude, I have to repeat, that I am absolutly agry with people, who belliave that government have to invest more money in the sport facilities for ordinary citizens. In this case our nation will be more healthy and finaly we will save money on medical insurance.
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facilities for ordinary citizens.

One hand,
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have always
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loved
professional
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sportsmens
. They like to
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watch
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sport
competitions, like football or hockey. This
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people
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suppouse
,
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government
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have to
build
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big
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stadiums
and other expensive
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sport
facilities. I have a
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neighbour
. He is football
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fanat
. He has always
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complain
to me about
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stadium
in our city.
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the
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will
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built
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lot of
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people
needs
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sport
facilities
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near
theirs
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. I support this point of view. I
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we
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ned to
invest more
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in
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small
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stadiums
and work out facilities
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near
ours
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houses
.
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Me
and my wive
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are loving
to do fitness,
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but
there are no space to do this
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near
our home. I
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think
, if
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government
had built new swimming pool and work out
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stadium
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near
me, there would not been
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so
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drunk
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fat
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people
around us. I
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think
my
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neighbours
will do
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exersises
on this work out
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stadium
and
therefore
will be more healthy. This will
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reduce
the load of
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government
health care
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institut
and
therefore
we will save more money.

To conclude
, I
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repeat, that I am
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absolutly
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agry
with
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people
, who
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belliave
that
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government
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have to
invest more
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money
in the
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sport
facilities for ordinary citizens.
In this case
our nation will be more healthy and
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finaly
we will save
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money
on medical insurance.
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IELTS essay Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people.

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