It is believed by many people that Instead of purchasing expensive arts our government can spend that money anywhere else. In my opinion, I agree to this since money is a valuable resource and there are many causes that needs our governments urgent attention with financial help.
Buying an art is expensive, but if our government is wasting its assets in arts then it is not a very good thing. As we know that in our country farmers always are in need of financial help, government can redirect their expenses and help them out. This would help the farmer’s community and increase the productivity of crops and vegetables. There has been cases farmer suicides where they weren’t able to pay back the loan because of some natural calamity the crops were damaged. So instead of giving money to artists for their impeccable art, government can help these farmers with their dues.
Secondly, instead of buying art from outside our country, the government can export the national talent’s work and try to make a fortune out of that. Since buying from an international artist can cost a huge amount. So if we export our own artists to global level. It will not only help the artist to get recognized, but also can help improving his finances. Also, if our government buys art from a national artist it would cost them much less than what the international artists’ charges.
In conclusion, I would say that instead of wasting resources on the arts, government should be helping those who are economically weak and need their urgent financial attention.
It
is believed
by
many
people
that
Instead
of purchasing expensive
arts
our
government
can spend that money anywhere else. In my opinion, I
agree
to this since money is a valuable resource and there are
many
causes that needs our
governments
urgent attention with financial
help
.
Buying an
art
is expensive,
but
if our
government
is wasting its assets in
arts
then it is not a
very
good
thing. As we know that in our country
farmers
always are in need of financial
help
,
government
can redirect their expenses and
help
them out. This would
help
the
farmer’s
community and increase the productivity of crops and vegetables. There has been cases
farmer
suicides where they weren’t able to pay back the loan
because
of
some
natural calamity the crops
were damaged
.
So
instead
of giving money to
artists
for their impeccable
art
,
government
can
help
these
farmers
with their dues.
Secondly
,
instead
of buying
art
from outside our country, the
government
can export the national talent’s work and try to
make
a fortune out of that.
Since
buying from an international
artist
can cost a huge amount.
So if
we export our
own
artists
to global level. It will not
only
help
the
artist
to
get
recognized,
but
also
can
help
improving
his finances.
Also
, if our
government
buys
art
from a national
artist
it would cost them much less than what the international
artists’
charges.
In conclusion
, I would say that
instead
of wasting resources on the
arts
,
government
should be helping those who are
economically
weak and need their urgent financial attention.
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31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes