Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? v.8
Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. v. 8
It is believed that spending money on the arts is not very useful and that it should be directed elsewhere. I completely disagree with this and feel that the arts are worth every penny that is spent on them.
First of all, the arts are considered a national interest. In some countries, arts have significant importance and government establishes and maintains organizations that preserve the arts. For example, Canada, USA, UK, Australia has art museums all over the country that exhibit ancient arts. People who are interested can visit the museums free of cost. The cost of maintenance is undertaken by the government. Moreover, this increases the level of interest among the people. Thus, the government puts an inconsiderable amount of effort to preserve the arts in the form of museums, craft exhibitions, etcetera.
Secondly, the arts are considered to be a great form of entertainment by several people in the country. For instance, movies, exhibitions, crafts are derived from the arts. Movies are considered very lucrative and there is a film industry for every language. Like, Hollywood is in English, Tollywood is for Telugu, Bollywood for Hindi. Exhibitions and crafts display several creations like paintings, clay buildings, paper arts, and glass paintings.
Encouragement of arts from government improves the livelihood of thousands of people who base their career in the arts. This proves beneficial both to people who work on arts and others who enjoy art.
To conclude, since arts play an important role in the lives of people, it is very important for the government to make sure that the arts are financed properly in a variety of forms like museums, exhibitions, documentary films, craft expos, and so on.
It
is believed
that spending money on the
arts
is not
very
useful and that it should
be directed
elsewhere. I completely disagree with this and feel that the
arts
are worth every penny that
is spent
on them.
First of all
, the
arts
are considered
a national interest. In
some
countries,
arts
have significant importance and
government
establishes and maintains organizations that preserve the
arts
.
For example
, Canada, USA, UK, Australia has
art
museums
all over the country that exhibit ancient
arts
.
People
who
are interested
can visit the
museums
free of cost. The cost of maintenance is undertaken by the
government
.
Moreover
, this increases the level of interest among the
people
.
Thus
, the
government
puts an inconsiderable amount of effort to preserve the
arts
in the form of
museums
,
craft
exhibitions, etcetera.
Secondly
, the
arts
are considered
to be a great form of entertainment by several
people
in the country.
For instance
, movies, exhibitions,
crafts
are derived
from the
arts
. Movies
are considered
very
lucrative and there is a film industry for every language. Like, Hollywood is in English,
Tollywood
is for Telugu, Bollywood for Hindi. Exhibitions and
crafts
display several creations like paintings, clay buildings, paper
arts
, and glass paintings.
Encouragement of
arts
from
government
improves
the livelihood of thousands of
people
who
base their career in the
arts
. This proves beneficial both to
people
who
work on
arts
and others
who
enjoy art.
To conclude
, since
arts
play an
important
role in the
lives
of
people
, it is
very
important
for the
government
to
make
sure that the
arts
are financed
properly
in a variety of forms like
museums
, exhibitions, documentary films,
craft
expos, and
so
on.
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39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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