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some people that good teamwork makes a company successful. others think a good leadership is the reason behind the success of a company

some people that good teamwork makes a company successful. others think a good leadership is the reason behind the success of a company 027G
Team-work and good leadership both things are very important. In success of any company. But some people believes that, teamwork is very important if company wants good results. while other people say company can achieve higher result if they have quiailty leader. In this essay, both views will be discussed in upcoming pharagraphs. I wiil give my own opinion. First of all we going to discuss that why people are faver in good teamwork for company’s profit. If all worker work together then they can be more focused about their work. Because all the burden going to distribute to all employess. This is the reason due to they can give their hundred present. With work in team empolyess can make strong bond with each other which is also good for company. On the other hand, few people think differently. They says that, company can get good turnover if it have good leader. There is a big reason why they believes in strong leadership. Because if any project is done by one person. he can get proper control on it. While there is number of people who gives there idea then every one gets confucess. In my point of views, there should be one leader in company who should have abilities to lead all staff. Decision should be taken by caption of team with help of other members of group. If company do well leader should give credit to all staff members. But if company goes in lose then responesbilites must be taken by leader.
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leadership both things are
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company
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believes
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if
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wants
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good
results.
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while
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other
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people
say
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company
can achieve higher result if they have
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quiailty
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pharagraphs
. I
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wiil
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faver
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teamwork for
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employess
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empolyess
can
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strong bond with each
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company
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On the
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hand, few
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can
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get
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turnover if it
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. There is a
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reason why they
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believes
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if any project
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he
can
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get
proper control on it.
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then every one
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company
who should have abilities to lead all staff. Decision should
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help
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If
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company
do well
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leader
should
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give
credit to all staff members.
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company
goes in lose then
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responesbilites
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must
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IELTS essay some people that good teamwork makes a company successful. others think a good leadership is the reason behind the success of a company

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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