Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.27

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 27 07XB
Nowadays, English play vital role in every life of person. The craze of learning English language is common and rise rapidly in the heart of people. Most of the institute are available which assist us to learn languages. A number of people consider that is only reason to learning abroad languages is for traveling and a work purposes while, other believed that these are the not only reason of learning foreign languages besides people learn for his purposes on the contrary as per my opinion I think that they learn language for traveling to other countries and a work. In addition, people want to go overseas due to which they learn foreign language for to survive in traveling country. Moreover, they used other languages for to work in there. Numerous of students are also visited to abroad for to pursuing higher study therefore it, they learn foreign language. People learn these languages owing to the fact that they have dream to want overseas. For instance, as per information 70 % of students are pursuing English for to visit Canada, Australia, New Zealand and other countries. On the next side, a number of people say that, the reason of learning foreign languages is not like these in light of the fact that they believed that, people learn these languages for other purposes like to study in Germany, England and the most of people want to learn English language due to the fact all the books of higher study class are in English texts also this language is an international language which are used in every side of globe. Not only this, a number of people have font to learn languages that is why, they learn foreign languages. To conclude, I consider that, for to survive in modern era these languages is helpful us for to communicate with overseas peoples and also assist for schooling study therefore I advice to people's should be learned it.
Nowadays, English play vital role in every life of person. The craze of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is common and rise
rapidly
in the heart of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. Most of the institute are available which assist us to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
. A number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
consider
that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
reason to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
abroad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
is for traveling and a work purposes while,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
believed that these are the not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
reason of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
besides
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
for his purposes
on the contrary
as per my opinion I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
for traveling to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
countries and a work.
In addition
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
want to go overseas due to which they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
for to survive in traveling country.
Moreover
, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
for to work in there. Numerous of students are
also
visited to abroad for to pursuing higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
therefore
it, they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
owing to the fact that they have dream to want overseas.
For instance
, as per information 70 % of students are pursuing English for to visit Canada, Australia, New Zealand and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
countries. On the
next
side, a number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
say that, the reason of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
is not like these in light of the fact that they believed that,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
purposes like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in Germany, England and the most of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
due to the fact all the books of higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
are in English texts
also
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is an international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
which are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in every side of globe. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
this, a number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
have font to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
that is
why, they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learn
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
.
To conclude
, I consider that, for to survive in modern era these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
is helpful us for to communicate with overseas
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
peoples
and
also
assist for schooling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
therefore
I
Did you mean "advise" (verb) instead of advice (noun)?
advice
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's should
be learned
it.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. v. 27

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
323 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts