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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The main motive behind the invention of Television was to provide entertainment to people of all age groups. People often find themselves turning back to their television sets, at the end of their tiresome and hectic day-to-day lives, in hopes to find relief from their woes. I consider myself an avid fan of television and truly belief that its a great source of entertainment. If each and every Television show were to depict social issues, the main idea of Television, which was to entertain the people will be lost and the dramas will start losing their essence. I shall elaborate on these views in greater detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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