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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The main motive behind the invention of Television was to provide entertainment to people of all age groups. People often find themselves turning back to their television sets, at the end of their tiresome and hectic day-to-day lives, in hopes to find relief from their woes. I consider myself an avid fan of television and truly belief that its a great source of entertainment. If each and every Television show were to depict social issues, the main idea of Television, which was to entertain the people will be lost and the dramas will start losing their essence. I shall elaborate on these views in greater detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.
The main motive behind the invention of
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Television
was to provide entertainment to
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people
of all age groups.
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People
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find themselves turning back to their
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television
sets, at the
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end
of their tiresome and hectic day-to-day
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lives
, in hopes to find relief from their woes. I consider myself an avid fan of
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television
and
truly
belief that
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its
a great source of entertainment. If each and every
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Television
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show
were to depict social issues, the main
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idea
of
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Television
, which was to entertain the
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people
will
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and the dramas will
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start
losing their essence. I shall elaborate on these views in greater detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.

IELTS essay Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. with this statement?

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