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A travel to the ice cream shop

A travel to the ice cream shop kD9O

It wasn’t exactly a meal, when I was a child, I guess I was 5 years old? However, I went with my sister to the ice cream shop, she was 8 years old. It was a strange to go alone with out my mom, it was a small city with a lot of small neighbourhood that must be crossed that reach you to the city centre, it used to contain a train station so it was always crowded, she give us £5 which equal 30 in Saudi riyal, and it was more than enough, the man who work there give us back a small change, there was a lot of coins, Which can make two young girls think that they are rich with an ice cream cone.

It wasn’t exactly a meal, when I was a child, I guess I was 5 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
? However
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompanied
went with
 my sister to the ice cream shop, she was 8 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. It was a strange to go alone This word is usually written together. Did you mean "without"?without
with out
 my mom, it was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 city with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
 that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be crossed
 that reach you to the city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to contain a train station This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it was always crowded, she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "gives", "gave".givesgave
give
 us £5 which equal 30 in Saudi riyal, and it was more than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 who work there give us back a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
, there was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 coins, Which can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 two young girls This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that they are rich with an ice cream cone. 