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some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. others feel that high taxes are bad thing. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. others feel that high taxes are bad thing. w97e
A number of people have believed that roads and schools are necessary public is reserved by a government and authorities will spend consequently the proportion of tax for these, while others don't accept pay high taxes, and they feel, which are bad idea. In my opinion, it is better for all people, and increase public wealth for them. On one side of the arguments. There are people who hold the opinion that higher rate taxes are the best idea for raise of welfare. This help to cycle economically in a country, for instance, the servicing and fix schools need to facilitate, such as fix water pipe or benches, and so on. consequently, the administration should pay much money to provide them in additional many jobs, create for service companies, or labourers. For example, if the walls of the school need to paint, they paint by a painter. And so, help to individuals. This situation is great help to individuals in another point, the tax should be spent for prevent of accidents or sudden events. For example, if the roads and highways are not repaired and maintained. The accidents, increase and lead to death. So, this issue is very important. So allocating money to this part is very important. Despite these aforementionedviews, Other people believed that to make high tax living on people's salaries, is bad things, the less well off can't pay high tax, so they feel pressure on themselves. For example, some people have a high salary or work into fields, without pay taxes. So, the government supply taking more tax off the pool and other points. Some people feel that high tax for some things which are broken by others is not important, impartial. For instance, more budgets are spent on buying facelifts of parks. After that, some people broke them, and the government should pay money, again, for repaired them. So, they feel the high tax is not fair to come to load with the arguments, given a vote, above. I firmly believe that although the high tax supply pressure on individuals, but it can more advantage than less tax.
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people
have believed that roads and schools are necessary public
is reserved
by a
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government
and authorities will spend
consequently
the proportion of
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tax
for these, while others don't accept
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pay
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high
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taxes
, and they
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feel
, which are
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bad
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idea
. In my opinion, it is better for all
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people
, and increase public wealth for them.

On one side of the arguments. There are
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people
who hold the opinion that higher rate
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taxes
are the best
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idea
for raise of welfare. This
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help
to cycle
economically
in a country,
for instance
, the servicing and
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fix
schools need to facilitate, such as
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fix
water pipe or benches, and
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so
on.
consequently
, the administration should
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pay
much money to provide them in additional
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many
jobs, create for service
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companies
, or
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labourers
.
For example
, if the walls of the school need to paint, they paint by a painter. And
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so
,
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help
to individuals. This situation is great
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help
to individuals in another point, the
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tax
should
be spent
for
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prevent
of accidents or sudden
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events
.
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, if the roads and highways are not repaired and maintained.

The accidents, increase and lead to death.
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So
, this issue is
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very
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important
.
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So
allocating money to this part is
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very
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important
.

Despite these
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aforementionedviews
,
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people
believed that to
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make
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high
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tax
living on
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people
's salaries, is
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bad
things, the less well off can't
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pay
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high
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tax
,
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so
they
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feel
pressure on themselves.
For example
,
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some
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people
have a
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high
salary or work into fields, without
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pay
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taxes
.
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So
, the
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government
supply taking more
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tax
off the pool and
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other
points.
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Some
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people
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feel
that
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high
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tax
for
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some
things which
are broken
by others is not
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important
, impartial.

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, more budgets
are spent
on buying facelifts of parks. After that,
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some
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people
broke them, and the
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government
should
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pay
money, again, for repaired them.
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So
, they
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feel
the
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high
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tax
is not
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fair
to
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come
to load with the arguments,
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given
a vote, above. I
firmly
believe that although the
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high
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tax
supply pressure on individuals,
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but
it can more advantage than less
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tax
.
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IELTS essay some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. others feel that high taxes are bad thing.

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  American English
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