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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for eg:working for a charity,improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports for ypunger children).

It is believe that unpaid social service should be a mandatory part of middle school activities. though it has some advantages, I donot agree with the statement making it compulsory will not be appropriate for students becaus they already have lots of sunjects to study in limited time and many of them even donot have intrest on such programmes. Childrens already have burden of doing many homeworks, school projects such activities will affect thei academics. they wil face challenges in their studies. they may also fail in exams. for instance, countries like nepal, students already have eight to nine subjects in schol curriculum adding it will hamper their studies. many of them also can missuse the allocated time, even bunk their classesand enjoy with their friends instead of having learning experience. Moreover, many of them are not mature enough to handle such service programmes, if they are forced it will create negative attitude towards community service. there sholud be inner desire only then there will be improvement in a person and in the society. besides, one cannot deny thefact that these types of service teaches social norms and values. it alsp teaches them to be creative and helpful. these types of programmes should be made optional so that the students who are intrested can take part in such types of activities. it will also not be hard for them. I think students should be more focused on their main target their education than the thing that will distract them. In conclusion, despite of some postive factors, community service should not be added or it should be made noncompulsory rather than making it obligatory part of high school.
It is
believe
that unpaid social
service
should be a mandatory part of middle school activities.
though
it has
some
advantages, I
donot
agree
with the statement making it compulsory will not be appropriate for
students
becaus
they already have lots of
sunjects
to study in limited time and
many
of them even
donot
have
intrest
on such
programmes
.
Childrens
already have burden of doing
many
homeworks
, school projects such activities will affect
thei
academics.
they
wil
face challenges in their studies.
they
may
also
fail in exams.
for
instance, countries like
nepal
,
students
already have eight to nine subjects in
schol
curriculum adding it will hamper their studies.
many
of them
also
can
missuse
the allocated time, even bunk their
classesand
enjoy with their friends
instead
of having learning experience.
Moreover
,
many
of them are not mature
enough
to handle such
service
programmes
, if they
are forced
it will create
negative
attitude towards community
service
.
there
sholud
be inner desire
only
then there will be improvement in a person and in the society.
besides
, one cannot deny
thefact
that these types of
service
teaches social norms and values.
it
alsp
teaches them to be creative and helpful.
these
types of
programmes
should
be made
optional
so
that the
students
who are
intrested
can
take part
in such types of activities.
it
will
also
not be
hard
for them. I
think
students
should be more focused on their main target their education than the thing that will distract them.
In conclusion
,
despite of
some
postive
factors, community
service
should not be
added or
it should
be made
noncompulsory
rather
than making it obligatory part of high school.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for eg: working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports for ypunger children).

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