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Some people believe that to protect local culture forasna should be banned in some anear whenees others think that change is inevitable and banning Hours till have Piscurs both view benefits. and give your opinion,

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people
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be shared
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that
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musim
being
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Youous
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benefitle
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culture
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get
recognition at international
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because
visitor
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come
to
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culture
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place
from all over the world as He
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le
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industory
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forefical
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places
.
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,
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tourisme
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culture
to sum extent, when native masses lie to imitate life style,
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culture
and
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lanuguages
of
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wsiters
then they may detach from their natural

Shifting towards the second school of
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thought
, forest and
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foremest
, technology is playing role to distract
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people
from their local
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culture
.
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, social media
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.
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foray immigration is
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places
where
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people
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get
mare opportunities for their bright future they prefer to learn new
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languages like,
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english
there is hardly any
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place
where
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indriudual
hare been not taking interest in this language.

Hammering the last mail, I would like to
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infan that
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tourism
has significant sale in the
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progrets
of country
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nd
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ot
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greatful
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IELTS essay Some people believe that to protect local culture forasna should be banned in some anear whenees others think that change is inevitable and banning Hours till have Piscurs both view benefits. and give your opinion,

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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