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some people believe that teachers should be friendly and other people think that teacher should be very bad. do you agree or disagree

some people believe that teachers should be friendly and other people think that teacher should be very bad. 6xLRB
In the modern era professor are playing a vital role in child's life without teachers, student cannot achieve goals in life. Some individuals claim that tutors should be friendly with their learners whereas, others opine supervisor should be sticking with their students. Teachers support to student achieve good result. I believe that teachers should be friendly with their students I will discuss both viewpoint and give an opinion in the upcoming paragraph. On the one hand, those people who believe that lecturers should be very strict with their students. First of all, nowadays many children who do not like to study so it is better for them and secondly some pupil have bad behaviour, and they behave badly with their friendly teachers. Therefore teachers should be very strict and in this way graduate learns many things from their schoolteacher. On the flip side, some people claim that teachers should be friendly. First of all, if teachers are friendly, junior can share problems with their teachers which are faced by the learners in studies. It will be very beneficial for students. Secondly tutors motivate to their undergraduate work together in a team. So that, they learn many skills like, how to corporate with each other and students get a chance to bring out the hidden talent with singing, painting, dancing and many more. Another point is that if friendly disciples teach to their students and pupil understand easily from friendly friendly teachers. Students help to set their career. To sum up, I would say that every coin has two sides. So that coach have two facets, strictly and friendly and I think student should learn many things from professor, as instructor guide to their students much better than artificial intelligence machines and it is very beneficial for school followers in the future and they can learn many things from the teachers.
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teachers
,
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cannot achieve goals in life.
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individuals claim that tutors should be
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friendly
with their learners whereas, others opine supervisor should be sticking with their
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students
.
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Teachers
support to
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student
achieve
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good
result. I believe that
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teachers
should be
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friendly
with their
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students
I will discuss both viewpoint and give an opinion in the upcoming paragraph.

On the one hand, those
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people
who believe that lecturers should be
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very
strict with their
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students
.
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First of all
, nowadays
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many
children who do not like to study
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it is better for them and
secondly
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pupil have
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bad
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behaviour
, and they behave
badly
with their
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friendly
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teachers
.
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Therefore
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should be
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very
strict and in this way graduate
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learns
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many
things from their schoolteacher.

On the flip side,
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claim that
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should be
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, if
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are
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friendly
, junior can share problems with their
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teachers
which
are faced
by the learners in studies. It will be
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very
beneficial for
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students
.
Secondly
tutors motivate to their undergraduate work together in a team.
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that, they
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learn
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many
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skills
like, how to corporate with each other and
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students
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get
a chance to bring out the hidden talent with singing, painting, dancing and
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more. Another point is that if
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disciples teach to their
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students
and pupil understand
easily
from
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friendly
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friendly
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Students
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help
to set their career.

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that coach have
two facets,
strictly
and
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friendly
and I
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think
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student
should
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learn
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many
things from professor, as instructor guide to their
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students
much better than artificial intelligence machines and it is
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very
beneficial for school followers in the
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future and
they can
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learn
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many
things from the
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teachers
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IELTS essay some people believe that teachers should be friendly and other people think that teacher should be very bad.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
310 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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