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Some people believe that research of medicines should be directly based on human trial. Is this the right way give your opinion and discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

Some people believe that research of medicines should be directly based on human trial. Is this the right way give your opinion and discuss its advantages and disadvantages. 3ale5
Generally, medicine trials are performed on animals or by computer-based examination before applying on individuals, except those which are a non-serious impact on human beings. While a certain group of people are in favour of all new trials should straightly apply to the end-users suffering from the disease, whereas, it has some pros and cons. However, I am fully disagreeing with the viewpoint of the direct test on human life. Trials can give both results whether successful or unsuccessful, and it would be very critical to release medicine in an open market without getting the authentic output. If experts would directly test medicines on human life, they put the life at risk by ignoring its further symptoms. Apart from this, it would be more difficult to procure the side-effects, as at that time they would be unaware that, how dangerous it will? For example, during the covid-19 pandemic, in some countries trials are applied on infected persons and it was lead to result in death for some cases. Therefore, human trials have a lot of ill-effects and a great loss to the precious life of individuals. On the other hand, sometimes the patient is in critical conditions with unidentified viruses, at that time to save that life immediate trials are applied on them, which would result in both sides positive or negative. As, nobody in the medical field intentionally put the life at risks, unless such a situation arises and also pressure to save the life of other public. In addition to this, they are also unaware of what kind of the disease, whether it is communicable or not. For example, in Wuhan, which is the epic centre of covid-19, they are unable to control the worse situation as it was transferring one to another. Hence, in such kind of situation, it is beneficial to directly trial to take chance to save that person and millions of others. In conclusion, even though there are many drawbacks of human trials which lead to serious outcomes, however, in particular, situation benefits can also not to be ignored.
Generally
, medicine
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trials
are performed
on animals or by computer-based examination
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before
applying on individuals, except those which are a non-serious impact on
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human
beings. While a certain group of
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people
are in
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favour
of all new
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trials
should
straightly
apply to the
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end
-users suffering from the disease, whereas, it has
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some
pros and cons.
However
, I am
fully
disagreeing with the viewpoint of the direct
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test
on
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human
life.

Trials can give both results whether successful or unsuccessful, and it would be
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very
critical to release medicine in an open market without getting the authentic output. If experts would
directly
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test
medicines on
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human
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life
, they put the
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life
at
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risk
by ignoring its
further
symptoms. Apart from this, it would be more difficult to procure the
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side-effects
, as at that time they would be unaware that, how
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dangerous
it will?
For example
, during the
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covid-19
pandemic, in
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some
countries
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trials
are applied
on infected persons and it was lead to result in death for
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some
cases.
Therefore
,
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human
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trials
have
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a lot of
ill-effects and a great loss to the precious
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life
of individuals.

On the other hand
,
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sometimes
the patient is in critical conditions with unidentified viruses, at that time to save that
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life
immediate
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trials
are applied
on them, which would result in both sides
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positive
or
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negative
. As, nobody in the medical field
intentionally
put the
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life
at
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risks
, unless such a
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situation
arises and
also
pressure to save the
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life
of other public.
In addition
to this, they are
also
unaware of what kind of the disease, whether it is communicable or not.
For example
, in Wuhan, which is the epic
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centre
of
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covid-19
, they are unable to control the worse
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situation
as it was transferring one to another.
Hence
, in such kind of
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situation
, it is beneficial to
directly
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trial
to take chance to save that person and millions of others.

In conclusion
,
even though
there are
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many
drawbacks of
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human
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trials
which lead to serious outcomes,
however
,
in particular
,
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situation
benefits can
also
not to be
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ignored
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that research of medicines should be directly based on human trial. Is this the right way give your opinion and discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

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