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Most of people believe that university tuition fees should not be free for students.this is at odds with my belife for two reason

Most of people believe that university tuition fees should not be free for students. this is at odds with my belife for two reason qVWXp

First and foremost, The student who enter to the universities, have made an efforts so much for getting such a permission. they have studied hard and so they have to continue their endeavor after entrance to university for improving their scientific level and experiences if they want to become a creative person for their country. Having mental disturbance for the university tuition fees, causes inadequate concentration on their original purpose. Second, monetary universities, do not let to poor but talented students to get chance for entering and doing higher education at the universities because they cannot provide financial resources to study at that level. All in all, To increasing the efficiency of high level education in a country, governments must pay the fees by themselves.

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get
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universities
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because
 they cannot provide financial resources to study at that level. All in all, To increasing the efficiency of high level education in a country, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
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