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Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples. (Source: unknown)

Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. Give your opinion and relevant examples. (Source: unknown) 0Ap1G

Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples. (Source: unknown) Although, few number of layman think which humankind working under the professionalism as in the case doctors and teachers should be paid higher then sports personalities and entertainment stars. I think reserve manner and fully concur with the given statement. In this essay will examine the measure view points why clerical worker deserve highly paid.

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