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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices with this statement? J1Jw
Choices helps to increase product quality and services. They also helps to access the services on competing prices. Market will be overwhelmed by the low quality products. Will make a person more brainstorm about the item they wish to buy rather than only think about its purpose. It is often said the present generation enjoys a wide variety of choices on their decisions compared to our ancestors. The plethora of choices enjoyed by the humans definitely increased the quality of the products and services on the contray it also leads to the confusion on the end users and makes them more research before buying every product. On one hand, the availability of various choices elevated the value of the products and the services as the various companies are forced to compete with a product that delivers performance on the same price levels. As a result, all the conglomeres lost their monopoly on the market of various products and they are compelled by the market situations to increase service quality of their products rather than merely seeking measures to rise profit figures. This is a good sign for the end users as they can opt to buy the things that are catering their needs. For example, UAE telecom company "etisalat" forced to reduce their tariff rates with the emergence of new telecom network "Du" as the customers have an option to change their service provider without changing their number. On the other hand, the overwhelming number of choices also makes a person to do more research about a product before consuming. The people will be get greatly confused wih the almost identical names of the product and they have to spend lot of their time and efforts for comparing the various available products. Many people also stopped their habit of purchasing an individual brand and they tend to test emerging new brands and this may result in various health problems associated with the use of a cheap quality item. For example, In INDIA, one new brand named patanjali launched years back and attracted many of the customers by promising premium quality on their advertisetements later found the use of various harmful components on their product range. In a nut shell, I agree that the rising number of options in our living world is highly commentable as it increased the material quality of our products on the other side it also attract people to some low quality products that are detrimental for the human health.
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product
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and
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. They
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helps
to access the
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services
on competing prices. Market will
be overwhelmed
by the low
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quality
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products
. Will
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a person more brainstorm about the item they wish to
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think
about its purpose.

It is
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said the present generation enjoys a wide variety of
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choices
on their decisions compared to our ancestors. The plethora of
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choices
enjoyed by the
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humans


definitely increased the
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quality
of the
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products
and
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services
on the
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it
also
leads to the confusion on the
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users and
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makes
them more research
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buying
every product.

On one hand, the availability of
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various
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choices
elevated the value of the
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products
and the
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services
as the
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various
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companies
are forced
to compete with a
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product
that delivers performance on the same price levels.
As a result
, all the
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conglomeres
lost their monopoly on the market of
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various
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products and
they
are compelled
by the market situations to

increase
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service
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quality
of their
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products
rather
than
merely
seeking measures to rise profit figures. This is a
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good
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sign
for the
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end
users as they can opt to
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buy
the
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things


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that
are catering their needs.
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, UAE telecom
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company
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"
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etisalat
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"
forced to
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reduce
their tariff rates with the emergence of new telecom network
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"
Du
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"
as the
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customers


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have
an option to
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change
their
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service
provider without changing their number.

On the other hand
, the overwhelming number of
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choices
also
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makes
a person to do more research about a
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product
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before
consuming. The
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people
will be
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get
greatly
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confused


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wih
the almost identical names of the
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product and
they
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have to
spend
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lot of
their time and efforts for comparing the
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various
available
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products
.
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people
also
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stopped
their habit of purchasing an individual
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brand and
they tend to
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test
emerging new brands and this may result in
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various
health problems associated with the
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use
of a
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cheap
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quality
item.
For example
, In INDIA, one new brand named
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patanjali
launched years back and attracted
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many
of the customers by promising premium
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quality
on their
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advertisetements
later found the
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use
of
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various
harmful components on their
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product
range.

In a nut shell, I
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agree
that the rising number of options in our living world is
highly
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commentable
as it increased the material
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quality
of our
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products
on the other side it
also
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attract
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people
to
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some
low
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quality
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products
that are detrimental for the human health.

IELTS essay Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices with this statement?

Essay
  American English
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413 words
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