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some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of the environment while others think this is the responsibility of government. discuss both views and give your opinion.

first I believe that ever "individual" has to take care of the environment and they should look it has their "responsibility" to take care of it. In my opinion both individual and government should take care of the environment. First of all, every individual has to plant the tress in their daily life. they should take it has a challenge for "taking care" of it. The specific persons should water the plants every day And they should shape the plants by cutting into certain amount of leaves

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.First
first
 I believe that ever Use a smart opening quote here.“
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individualUse a smart closing quote here.”
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This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 take You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 of the Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).environment, and
environment and
 they should look it has their Use a smart opening quote here.“
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responsibilityUse a smart closing quote here.”
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 to take You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 of it. In my opinion both individual and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should take You use this word too often, consider replacing it withresponsibility
care
 of the environment. Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, every individual This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 plant the tress in their daily life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.They
they
 should take it has a challenge for Use a smart opening quote here.“
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taking careUse a smart closing quote here.”
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 of it. The specific persons should water the plants every day And they should shape the plants by cutting into certain amount of Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.leaves.leaves!leaves?leaves:leaves,leaves;
leaves