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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situationsuch as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.According to some it is best to accept a bad circumstanses, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. While others think that it is better to improve such situations. Regarding to some people, some employers spending more time at work but they don't work well. But other workers spend long hours at work, but they still make little profit and they will not be happy from this and feel themselves bad. Because they want to be better than yesterday. In some cases, such as poor country workers may work for the development of their society. On the other hand, others argued that they can try better and improve such situations and I also argued this idea. For example, if employees don't pay salary for workers at the level of their work, they work for the com

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situationsuch as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. According to some it is best to accept a bad circumstanses, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. While others think that it is better to improve such situations. Regarding to some people, some employers spending more time at work but they don't work well. But other workers spend long hours at work, but they still make little profit and they will not be happy from this and feel themselves bad. Because they want to be better than yesterday. In some cases, such as poor country workers may work for the development of their society. On the other hand, others argued that they can try better and improve such situations and I also argued this idea. For example, if employees don't pay salary for workers at the level of their work, they work for the com rpmo

According to some it is best to accept a bad circumstanses, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. While others think that it is better to improve such situations. Regarding to some people, some employers spending more time at work but they don't work well. But other workers spend long hours at work, but they still make little profit and they will not be happy from this and feel themselves bad. Because they want to be better than yesterday. In some cases, such as poor country workers may work for the development of their society. On the other hand, others argued that they can try better and improve such situations and I also argued this idea. For example, if employees don't pay salary for workers at the level of their work, they work for the company at the level of salary. Also, if employers make much money, they will be mentally healthy and such as situations workers work much better. This is also cause the increasing of the companies profit

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cause
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