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Some people believe that building unattractive houses should be prohibited because they are exposed to the public. What is your opinion about this?

Some people believe that building unattractive houses should be prohibited because they are exposed to the public. What is your opinion about this? PVklB
Most of the people expect that constructing an unimpressed home must be banned because they are addressed to the common people. According to me, I am totally disagree with this concept. Firstly, some type of people thinks that faded homes are backwarded for the country's tourism and looks very unimpressive scenes in the city. They totally concentrated on the beautiful and luxurious about the country's faith. They loves the splendid job of the common people and expecting to makes the environment in the tremendous things. Secondly, another group of people, they are focussed only on the financial status of the middle and poor people. Actually, the decoration of the houses mostly depends upon the wealth of the individuals. Unless, they are lacked of money, they would not build the most beautiful and attracted houses in the city. The shelters are mainly for the people to save from sunlight, rainfall and natural calamities. In the conclusion, the construction of building their own houses are fully depend upon the people's right. No one could interfer in others rights. If they prohibited these types of issue makes the people frustrated in all aspects and picked their freedom as well. So it should not be forced someone to build their own houses in other propectives.
Most of the
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expect
that constructing an unimpressed home
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must
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they
are addressed
to the common
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people
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totally
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disagree
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Firstly
,
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people
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thinks
that faded homes are
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backwarded
for the country's tourism and looks
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very
unimpressive scenes in the city. They
totally
concentrated on the
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beautiful
and luxurious about the country's faith. They
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loves
the splendid job of the common
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people
and expecting to
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makes
the environment in the tremendous things.

Secondly
, another group of
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people
, they
are focussed
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only
on the financial status of the middle and poor
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people
. Actually, the decoration of the
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houses
mostly
depends upon the wealth of the individuals. Unless, they
are lacked
of money, they would not build the most
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beautiful
and attracted
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houses
in the city. The shelters are
mainly
for the
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people
to save from sunlight, rainfall and natural calamities.

In the conclusion, the construction of building their
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own
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houses
are
fully
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depend
upon the
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people
's right. No one could
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interfer
in others rights. If they prohibited these types of issue
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makes
the
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people
frustrated in all aspects and picked their freedom
as well
.
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So
it should not
be forced
someone to build their
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own
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houses
in other
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propectives
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that building unattractive houses should be prohibited because they are exposed to the public. What is your opinion about this?

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