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What is your opinion regarding the future of e-Learning?

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Nowadays, all the young siblings are concentrating on online courses rather than the days scholar college. According to my experience and knowledge, the online courses would not have enough and bright future for the people. The education system has a lot of mode which we could improve our career and mental developments. But it should be in a generous and proper way to acheive it. The students would mingle with the other students and teachers will make a hardship experience in their life to know and study of people's mind. It has many advantanges such as attitudes improvements, social welfare and sharing the knowledge as well. So it would be a very fantastic journey in the days scholar life. The above same things would not happened to the online courses or e-learning courses. It is one of individual study system and isolated part which we never partner with our neighbors for any purposes. If we have any doubts regarding our subjects, it never gets clarified with the professor, lectures and colleagues to understand the difficult concept. So we always missed a lot of direct communicative experience in e-learning courses. In conclusion, the university courses would be splendid for our prosperous future not the e-learnings. The exposures never compared with the website learnings and it could not cause any wealth for our future.
Nowadays, all the young siblings are concentrating on online
courses
rather
than the
days
scholar college. According to my experience and knowledge, the online
courses
would not have
enough
and bright future for the
people
.

The education system has
a lot of mode
which we could
improve
our career and mental developments.
But
it should be in a generous and proper way to
acheive
it. The students would mingle with the other students and teachers will
make
a hardship experience in their life to know and study of
people
's mind. It has
many
advantanges
such as attitudes improvements, social welfare and sharing the knowledge
as well
.
So
it would be a
very
fantastic journey in the
days
scholar life.

The above same things would not
happened
to the online
courses
or e-learning
courses
. It is one of individual study system and isolated part which we never partner with our neighbors for any purposes. If we have any doubts regarding our subjects, it never
gets
clarified with the professor, lectures and colleagues to understand the difficult concept.
So
we always missed
a lot of
direct communicative experience in e-learning courses.

In conclusion
, the university
courses
would be splendid for our prosperous future not the e-learnings. The exposures never compared with the website learnings and it could not cause any wealth for our future.
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IELTS essay What is your opinion regarding the future of e-Learning?

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