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Some adept experts hold the opinion that the role of advertisement

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Some adept experts hold the opinion that the role of advertisement is of paramount importance to purchasing merchandise, while others opine that advertising is already ubiquitous; therefore, it no longer draws any attention. I strongly believe that advertisement is the only way to reach potential customers down the road and this essay and this essay will elaborate on the same in the following paragraphs while discussing both viewpoints.
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Some
adept experts hold the opinion that the role of advertisement is of paramount importance to purchasing merchandise, while others opine that advertising is already ubiquitous;
therefore
, it no longer draws any attention. I
strongly
believe that advertisement is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way to reach potential customers down the road and this essay and this essay will elaborate on the same in the following paragraphs while discussing both viewpoints.
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IELTS essay Some adept experts hold the opinion that the role of advertisement

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
68 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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