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Solving environmental problems is the responsibility of one international organization or the responsibility of each national government? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Environmental protection is perceived to be one of the most crucial factors in determining the development of countries and life quality. Some people believe that natural problems is the responsibility of international organization; contract, others think it’s national government’s duty to solve environment’s related issues. In my perspective, it will be more beneficial if both the national government, and international organization share the responsibility. An environmental problem may look alike, but in different countries it is often rooted in different causes. If there are many green issues, but only transnational organization have the liability, they can not quickly address issues of all nations at the same time. I think each country will have different ways to solve environmental pollution. Therefore, each domestic government should implement variety policies and measures to address the issues. For example, Vietnam’s government have practiced tree planting campaign to restore damaged forests. On the other hand, green issues of all nations in the world are also affected with each other. Because the global warming and climate change which a result of single country, all countries are the factor causing this disaster; hence, concerted efforts by all nations are necessary. International organization which play key role in connecting all nations and promoting global actions to restore ecosystem and reduce greenhouse. They with develop countries will support in providing advanced technology for poor country in solving the green issues. In conclusion, environment protection is a priority issues of worldwide. If there is no join of both parties, it would be impossible to wipe out those matters. I believe that the cooperation of individuals and government actions would make a greater impact on the environment.
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is perceived
to be one of the most crucial factors in determining the development of
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countries
and life quality.
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Some
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people
believe that natural problems is the responsibility of international
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organization
; contract, others

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think
it’s national
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government’s
duty to solve environment’s related
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issues
. In my perspective, it will be more beneficial if both the national
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government
, and international
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organization
share the responsibility.

An environmental problem may look alike,
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in
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different
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countries
it is
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rooted in
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different
causes. If there are
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many
green
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issues
,
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but
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only
transnational
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organization
have the liability, they can not
quickly
address
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issues
of all
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nations
at the same time. I
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think
each
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country
will have
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different
ways to solve environmental pollution.
Therefore
, each domestic
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government
should implement variety policies and measures to address the
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issues
.
For example
, Vietnam’s
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government
have practiced tree planting campaign to restore damaged forests.

On the other hand
, green
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issues
of all
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nations
in the world are
also
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affected
with each other.
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Because
the global warming and climate
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change
which a result of single

country, all
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countries
are the factor causing this disaster;
hence
, concerted

efforts by all
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nations
are necessary. International
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organization
which play key

role in connecting all
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nations
and promoting global actions to restore

ecosystem and
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reduce
greenhouse. They with develop
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countries
will support in

providing advanced technology for poor
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country
in solving the green issues.

In conclusion
, environment protection is a priority
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issues
of worldwide. If there is no
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join
of both parties, it would be impossible to wipe out those matters. I believe that the cooperation of individuals and
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government
actions

would
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make
a greater impact on the environment.
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IELTS essay Solving environmental problems is the responsibility of one international organization or the responsibility of each national government?

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276 words
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